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person missM
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank you! And a dedication, awwww shucks. This definitely made my day.

\"Madam Pomfrey
person sarah
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeeeeeeee!!

now I\'m all hot and bothered without the next chapter to read, darnit. I do hope you don\'t leave them there for too long! Cheers.
person sinj
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaarrrghhh!!! That was the cruellest place to stop! I can\'t believe you left us hanging there without giving us any lemons!!!! *throws teddy snape across the room in frustration*. You better update soon!!! Otherwise teddy snape gets it (and believe me, I\'m capable of inflicting hideous punishments) :oP
person excessivelyperky
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Lemon tree, very pretty, and the lemon flower is sweet, but the fruit of the poor lemon is impossible to eat.\"

Balderdash. I find it very yummy indeed, as proven by this story. I trust the ensuing chapter will bolster my belief.
person deblovesdragon
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You write the best banter Shiv. That was fantastic!
Wow, Poppy sure was helpful. Get her to bed and loosen her clothing... ha!
I also appreciate how you usually don\'t go into graphic detail with the sex in your stories. (except Biter Bit) It leaves it to our imaginations. But you describe the intensity between them nicely.
Just my 2 cents (pence).
Lovely chapter and write more soon please.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8... What a FABULOUS chapter!!! Nice to see Poppy help things along as well as seeing Hermione shoot down Harry!!! I am very much lookiorwaorward to seeing just exactly what Severus will be showing Hermione;-) Til chapter 9, D^..^^..^<
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe I love your story! I would love to read and puruse more but alas....at the moment my hubby is not able to survive 15ned ned minutes without me so i have to leave the wonderful world AFF to attend him. *giggle* I\'ll be watching for more chappies! Later!
person Ann
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my! *fanning self* Delicious -- better than chocolate mousse! Madame Pomfrey is an angel with a wicked sense of humor.

I just realized what Severus and Hermione lack in your stories -- inertia! They don\'t sit and think and wonder and fidget around, letting events choose for them. When these two decide something, they know they\'ve made a decision, and then act upon it. That is very refreshing after a world of shilly-shallying.
person spaz141
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hee hee, thanks for the update.
person gthistle
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
V. much enjoyed Pomfrey having (a) wit and (b) marks of fellow conspirator while remaining in (motherly, take-care-of-everyone) character.