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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why would you have two endings? Isn\'t the obvious ending with them together?? Although the plan is cool... I really hope you update soon, this is great!
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh gods.... that was too damn funny! i was laughing
throthe the entire thing.
love it, love it, LOVE IT!!!!!!
i look forward to the next installment.
please update soon.
~blessings~
ldf
throthe the entire thing.
love it, love it, LOVE IT!!!!!!
i look forward to the next installment.
please update soon.
~blessings~
ldf
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
It has potential.
It has potential.
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This had me laughing out loud (I think I frightened the dog) - wind, indeed. Another good story.
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This had me laughing out loud (I think I frightened the dog) - wind, indeed. Loved the shark visual too. Looking forward to more.
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! Hermione is quite the little she devil here isn\'t she;-) This will prove to be quite a fun & wild ride I\'m sure!!! Can\'t wait to see how things go on their trek to get over on the \"old goat\", just to get over on themselves!!! Hope you will be adding more soon!!! Deb >^..^<
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"No one is going to intrude on our grief and ask for their toaster back.\" Ha! I love that! I love a Hermione who is just as scheming and sneaky as Severus!
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh yes! Not that I am a fan of plot twists or anything (that\'s my evil twin - she\'s the one who keeps coming up with all the plot twists...heehee), but I\'m waiting with bated breath to see how you get from Point A to Point B!!! (Isn\'t that what makes it all so much fun?)
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this introduction! Please continue the story soon, it has real potential :)