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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*evil laughter* now this is quite a fun premise. Well, go on . :P Hurry up. I want to read more nowwww *whines* :D
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start! This looks like it\'s going to be very interesting....
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS BLOODY BRILLANT!!!!!!!!! I want more. NOW!
-jo
-jo
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*giggles*
Not a lot more to say than that, really.
Except it seems a bit harsh on Hermione to be making all run running; I hope you give her the (literal or metaphorical) upper hand at some point!
Not a lot more to say than that, really.
Except it seems a bit harsh on Hermione to be making all run running; I hope you give her the (literal or metaphorical) upper hand at some point!
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 is so good..... they both have some pretty creative thoughts going on in those devious minds of their\'s;-) Can\'t wait to see how the flirting goes & see what will happen after!!! Deb >^..^<
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!!! Bella! I love this!! I hope to see two endings....yes. One where they fall into their own trap and one where they fall truly for another. Update soon?
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! I can wait fore more! The idea of Snape and Hermione faking romance... hilarious!!
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shiv, You don\'t just do stand-alones, do you? You cannot leave this story like that! Get on with it. You have the most beautifully original ideas. To tell you the truth, I onalonally don\'t much care whether all these Sevs in fanfiction are true to character, I like the plot to be original. And yours is. But continue!
Magdalen
Magdalen
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This really has the potential to be completely hysterical!! ;) I already have found myself laughing out loud!! Great start!!
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great start.. please continue!