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person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter3........ I absolutely LOVE the plotting of these 2 brilliant & devious minds!!! I can\'t just picture all of the looks that they were getting!!! I think it was WONDERFUL how you had them placing clothing around the room;-) Sev wears no underwear, mmmmmm!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens during thae night they spend together!!! Til chapter 4, Deb >^..^<
person ldf
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
funny chapter!

thanks for saving me from the boredom
of having nothing to do on a Saturday night.
time is always well spent in the presence of
the Master.

i loved the whole imagery thing. can\'t wait for
more!

~blessings~
ldf
person RunnyInk
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
After you last comment, had to see what kind of stories you wrote: I love this! It\'s so funny, I honestly was in danger of wetting myself! Ron\'s immature remark about it being just wind really got me :). Going to have to look for the updates on this one and check out more of your stories now.
person ettirgam
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just brilliant. I\'m just thankful that I don\'t have a sore throat anymore, otherwise I would have spent much of tonight cursing you for making me laugh as much as I did. I honestly cannot wait for more. Thanks so much for writing.
person PinkChubbyMonkey
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Great idea! UPDATE SOON!
person tina
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome! i\'ve never seen snape painted quite this way before, and it\'s so witty and hilarious. keep it coming!
person Ann
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Snape and Hermione are very,very likeable in this. Not fluffy or ohsoangsty, but cheerfully snarky and intelligent. Thank you!
person SassMacfru
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hee tee bunnies!!! last two chapters were just great, love your humor!! Can\'t wait for the rest! Happy Holidays!!
person bansidh
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A book poking her? Yeah right! Merry merry and thanks for the update; I love this story.
person MadAboutHarry
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There were soy liy lines I just loved in this chapter. The last one though--\"You sleep with books? I knew there was something I liked about you,