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person Talene
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww.......where\'s the rest? *winks* Looking forward to updates!
person LittleBird
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Look at them trying to be all polite and respectful in these embarrassing situations -- all to pull the wool over everyone\'s eyes. Very funny!! Can\'t wait to see how other\'s react.
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hermione is going to catch on soon... Severus is taking a bitadvaadvantage of the situation. I hope Hermione isn\'t too angry with him.
person spaz141
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee, they are too funny. Thanks for the update.
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
definitely must go for verisimilitudinous displays - great chapter - more PLEASE.
person Estrilda
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oops - forgot to put my name on my review - it should be the one right above this. I do love this story - you might want to explain to American readers about \"parky.\" I think they would understand \"nippy.\"
person animegrl
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a goddess, I love this story like alur our others but this most of all I have been awaiting this update for so long, thank you thank you thank you, now please just one more chapter. (ok I will never be satisfied with just one more! :-P)
person Imp
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please. Poor y. Ay. And lets just leave Sev in the dark about Hermione knowing about the hand on the boob thing. Keep the poor man from getting too embarassed.
person ancientgirl
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you updated this story. I just love it to death. The banter is wonderful and its only a matter of time of course until things start getting real.
person kate
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"her nipples looked like they could be used for drilling for oil, they were so hard\" -- how ever do you come up with these? Perfect, just the right verisimilitude!