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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is like 1 of the best stories I have read ands this actually seems more realistic than more of the other ones. You should really continue to write this story. I totally sympothies to your PC being screwed up. A few spelling errors but that is always understandable and in 1 of the cahpters there was a whole sextion that repeated itself. The one with Iysle and Pro. M. in trans.
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February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oowww what a cliffy this is good kepp it up
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December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting premise, but you do need a beta. You make a lot of grammatical mistakes, and your verbal tenses keep going back and forth from past to present tense, which is very confusing and makes it hard to read your story.
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December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww... :( That\'s so sad. I really hope that Draco and Pansy... NEVER HAPPEN! I hate her SOOO much! Update soon!
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m a bit confused. You keep jumping around. Who broke them up?
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! Update soon!
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was greaters! Keep it going! w00t! Keep it goingers.
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Too rushed... slow down... update soon....
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Draco
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok... who was the whore who broke them up?! UPDATE SOON AND LET ME FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!