rate_review Reviews

Eeeeek! I just found this story...and..Eeeeek! This eeeek! means good things...though it does mean I am freaked out quite a lot.

Great story so far. I absolutally loved the inclusion of the SoHo bookshop from \"Gomensmens\"

wow that is a great start to a story well written and very descriptive....................I can\'t wait to see more and as always keep up the great work.

Why are you writing fanfiction? Your write so beautifully and your ability to describe every scene so vividly is absolutely evocative!! You have an eloquent writing style and your narration of this story is absolutely compelling. I am not surprised that you do not have too many reviews. Many great fic-writers have their work go unnoticed. It just proves that good work is hard to appreciate. I don\'t review too often but this is certainly worth commenting on. Please keep writing so I can envy you and your magic fingers. I hope, someday, I can write as good as you do.

I also hope that you are working on something original at the moment. You owe it to yourself.

Thank you for writing,
Zoe

It has been a bit since I had read this so I started over from the begining*

This is one of the best stories I havad rad recently. Is there a story that leads up to this because I am just a bit puzzled as to the background. Did he really turn back to Voldemort or was he caught on duty,playing the spy and the ministry is getting revenge for him getting off the hook the first time. I will be looking out for the next update

Wow (how original is that), what a great kickoff to what is definitely going to be a memorable story!
Negativenine I can hardly believe this is your first fic, it

Oh Yay! You\'ve updated! Oh the joy! Oh the rapture! Key-toh, key-toh, everything in the world is key-toh! ::dances around the room much as Smeagol danced when he finally got rid of Gollum::

And Pratchett references! ::grins foolishly:: Crowley would so appreciatnny\nny\'s five-fingered discount. I wonder if that\'s why he smiled. Anyway. Not the point.

The point: I love this story. It\'s horribly haunting, totally angsty, and while that hasn\'t been my thing in a while, it\'s like watching a train wreck. It\'s absolutely riveting and you couldn\'t possibly move from your position, even though you know that once all is said and done you\'ll do what you need to do ( be it rescue people, or provide feedback for the author).

Also a point of note: your characterizations are wonderful. Hermione is, of course, dead on, but it\'s the way you craft the marked lack-of-Severity, particularly after the first chapter, that has the chills crawling up and down my spine.

So... Please. Go over those notes, become one with your beta, and write these beautiful things that you write. Please.

Thank you.

oh man, what a story! Do you have any kind of an email update list? I can\'t wait to read the next chapter. The story had me in tears.

Wow, this is great. I\'m really looking foward to see what will happen. Hope Hermione can help Snape soo
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