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for Revenant

by jennengle

person crly
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when i read your story, chills run down my spine, and afterwards i\'m always a bit cold, but i think there must be sacrifices made... :) love your story, update soon!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6... I think this chapter stands on its own with out a doubt!!! Granted, it did have to do with the previous chapter, BUT it also had its own topic so I think that you seperated the 2 in a perfect place!!!

I am looking forward to seeing if Harry will be able to help get Narcissa!!! I am also curious to see how Hermione & Draco work together?!? Should be less volatile than 1 might think since they have a mutual cause!!!

I don\'t recall if I\'ve mentioned it before, but I wanted to say that I am very touched by the INCREDIBLE way that you describe Severus!!! I can picture him in my mind & to think of him in this state is heart wrenching!!!

As always I will be looking forward to your next update, Deb >^..^<
person Mei Of Maze
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I realise this isn\'t useful critizism, but I must say: wonderful! Jolly good!

T.T I am tly tly enjoying this work of art, learning process or no~!
person booklvr
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly entranced by this story. Please keep writing.
person booklvr
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly entranced by this story. Please keep writing.
person Ran
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a great take on this theme! I love your angsty and tragic heroes. I can\'t wait for more :)
person otherside
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, i love this story. its extremley well written and i am eager to see how you save poor snape from his fate. the first chapter was very dark- i loved it. and the boy who lived to drink snape\'s tea was great. i hope snapes tea making abilities appear again, just because
person KDarkMaiden
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. its better than wonderful! I hope you update soon! REALLLLLLLLYYYYYYYY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
person Kate McGuire
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love the details of the story. The book titles, M. McTabby, powershopping Ginny, Draco and Uncle Sev, everything. Especially though I like your description of the effects of the evil book.
person ran
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I am looking forward to where you take it. ::sits down to wait for updates ... patiently... NOT!::