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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT !!!!!! That was so sweet and touching. I can just imagine that they would go about their first time together exactly like that!
It was wonderful!!! * Kudos* I will gladly read anything else you write. In fact I am looking forward to it!! So write ,te, te, write!
~ Jaimie ~
It was wonderful!!! * Kudos* I will gladly read anything else you write. In fact I am looking forward to it!! So write ,te, te, write!
~ Jaimie ~
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice one , but as much I don\'t really like male gayness, the education of Herm and Harry should continue with another female separatly and all together.
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well I can say that this story is very good and I like you to continue whit this story werever you like but just don\'t put to mutch of snape please ok bye
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. The wording was a bit archaic for two 17-year-olds, but the tenderness was nice. NO SNAPE!!!! But the threesome in a threesome would be fine.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thought it was great! Keep up the good writing!!!
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would really like u 2 cointinue this please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I certainly wouldn\'t mind a continuation. Mind more smut? Are you kidding? ;)
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey go ahead and do them I promise I will read them :)
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I personally liked this fanfiction alot. All of your ideas flowed together and the ending was almost like a cliffhanger.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really liked harry and hermionerninrning about sex and it seems like they would include ron in their games. the only question would be how to include him without hurting each other. any combination of harry, hermione, and ron would be cool, but under no circumstances should snape appear. it wou't m't make sense for the story you have. at least in my opinion.