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for Twisted Silver

by Rasticles

person Raija
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is greatd I d I can see Harry and Severus smoking in my eyes...it\'s pretty sexy...tee hee hee. But anyways i am hoping that you would update this soon.
person slytherindominatrix
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be a great fic, I think. By \"going to be\", I mean that I expect that it will be continued, right? I hope so as I love where this story is headed! The changes in Harry are simply marvelous. Draco\'s attitude towards him are what I expected, with the \"sweeping the past under the " th" thing. Hungry for power from both sides is great!
person raija
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Way to go. This is great. maybe you can update soon?
person Miss Lesley
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I decided that as you are the closest thing to a father I have (being of course because you did kill mine) Dude that is a great line. I love this story. Can harry use hermione as a slave? What a bitch using ron to make harry jealous. hello how would harry know that. And why would the old harry betray his best and first friend over a woman?
person Feron Sanchez
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!! Oh crap.. I have to cook for thanksgiving. Happy Thanksgiving!!

I\'ll review again later or tomorrrow. Sorry!! Thanks for the insight on Hedwig.

Slytherin Harry....Geez Ron is an asshole.. Amazing chapter as always and can\'t wait for the next one.

I wonder who will be the first one to face Harry\'s wrath.
person Priest
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it till i read the part about harry having near ass length hair, it\'s unattractive and makes no sence in context of the story. can you explan to me the attracting to \"anime\" hair on characters ment to have short hair?

other than that the story was really good but i can\'t continue reading it with characters that look that ridiculous
person elementaldeity
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like the father son dynamic in the letter. Can\'t wait until the party. Keep posting, I\'ll keep reading and reviewing.
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
While I may not have written the most....verbose of reviews....I have been with this story from the first and have been enjoying it tremndously! I am also lookng forward to reading more of this story. Please write more soon?
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start on the story. I absolutely love dark!Harry, but I could be a bit biased because of my own story. I wonder how Snape will react to Harry in his house, and how Dumbledore is going to \"keep his golden boy.\" *snorts* Ya... right.

.:ochi:.
~*Read Proditio: It\'s good for all you evil overlords out there!*~
person elementaldeiy
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If Harry went into the dungeons, with a fireplace instead of a window, how did hedwig get out? How could he watch her go off into the night and stars?