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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Looks fine to me! hehe More??
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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hope you are feeling better and thanks for the update.
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now that was just bizarre and I almost never shis,his, too short. But hey, yay for the Severus and Harry. Thanks.
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that Sev won!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens when they get back to the dungeon;-) Deb >^..^<
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think that you have glossed over the last couple of chapters a bit quickly. It would have been nice if you had slowed the pace down a bit, and shown us more detail of what happened and how people felt about things.
The start of this story was relatively well done, and had more of the details that people need to flesh out a story.
The start of this story was relatively well done, and had more of the details that people need to flesh out a story.
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Short but nice. More?
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting....keep it up.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
To the death...oh my. Thanks.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just finished 11 &12*
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Been with the story from the first and am enjoying very much. Never did like Fudge. Bloody wanker! Looking for future chappies. Later.