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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like your take on this & look forward to seeing where you go with it!!! No doubt that Draco & his father will be pissed!!!
Deb >^..^<
Deb >^..^<
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like the Marriage Contract stories. I haven\'t read one yet where Snape was already in love...cute concept! I like that fluffy feeling!
I have noticed that the quality of your writing has increased as you publish more of your creative stories! Kudos.
I will be waiting for more :)
I have noticed that the quality of your writing has increased as you publish more of your creative stories! Kudos.
I will be waiting for more :)
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That is such a cute start. I like the way you have Severus wanting Hermione in this one. In almost all the other ones it has Severus\' Father forcing him. I can\'t wait to see how Draco reacts to losing Hermione to Severus. And how Hermione deals with being married to Severus.
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know that I have given you this same advice in prior stories, but I saw that folks are dropping your star rating and not really telling you why. I don\'t think that is terribly fair, so I felt compelled to try again. Please, please run your story through spell check before posting it. You can find an excellent set of grammar rules in an article written by Peeves a few weeks ago. She also gives directions in how to spell check if you don\'t have a word processing program. The most consistent error in your first chapter (besides spelling) is the use of \"to\" instead of \"too.\" Please read through your story and put in \"too\" when you mean \"also\" or \"very.\" Good luck.
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good start to another great story.
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Potter ~
I have read all of your stories and I commend you for two things. Originality of thought and a tenacious mentality in regard to slogging on despite all opposition. I very much respect that. In comparing your stories when you first began posting, to the ones that you are posting now, there is a very great and noticable difference, you are improving in your writing. You still have much improving to do in certain areas, but I honestly believe that the fact that you continue and keep on trying says a lot for your character.
((raspberry))
Peeves
I have read all of your stories and I commend you for two things. Originality of thought and a tenacious mentality in regard to slogging on despite all opposition. I very much respect that. In comparing your stories when you first began posting, to the ones that you are posting now, there is a very great and noticable difference, you are improving in your writing. You still have much improving to do in certain areas, but I honestly believe that the fact that you continue and keep on trying says a lot for your character.
((raspberry))
Peeves
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take on the challenge.
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January 23, 0000 at 12:00 AM
u are a good wrighter.........and i love p.o.vs this is great please4 cuntinue...PLEASE>>>