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by Amireal

person Mikee
schedule January 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. I've read it twice so far. I do hope you will continue it. It is quite well written. Please, are you planning more? I do so hope so. Thank you for a fine read.
person Ox King
schedule January 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a incredable story. You had everyones personalities to the tee. Snipe's witty humor keped me lauging through the whole story. I'm looking forward to what happens next. Keep up the good work.
person Mikee
schedule January 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful story. Will there be more.? Please. I want to know what happens when Lucius comes to see Severus. Will Severus and Harry need to use their wand-less magic on Lucius.? Please, more.

Thank you for a fantastic story. So well written. I chuckled so many time :-)

Thank you, again.

Mikee
person Sandy
schedule January 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved every second of the time it took me to read it. Especially where they're fighting the feelings that are lying beneath the charm. Excellent story.
person lauren
schedule December 17, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I devoured it (the story) in one night (about 2 hours worth of reading). Please let me know if and, when you update it. Thanks .
person Maeglin Yedi
schedule October 17, 2002 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic! I think you wrote Severus and Harry very well, absolutely in character. And the D/R/H pairing was a surprise, but not an unpleasant one. Wonderful story!

Maeglin Yedi
person Calmardaa
schedule October 17, 2002 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Just read parts 1 - 40 and I loved it!!! Great ideas, excellent interaction with the characters. Desperate for more ....... REALLY desperate. Looking forward to updates. Great job. (Sorry I\'m not very good with reviewing and stuff.)
person Fox
schedule October 16, 2002 at 12:00 AM
A little bare bones at first, but it picks up nicely and is interesting and certainly worth reading. Please post more soon, I\'d enjoy seeing where this will go. And yeah, I suck at reviewing; but I do like this story so cut me some slack. *grins*