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by Amireal

person Juno
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great story. it\'s well written with interesting plot twists. not to mention interesting couples. love the threesome. if you ever get around to it another couple chapters would be nice, but even left unfinished tis a masterful work of beauty and craftsmanship. nice job
Juno
email me if you decide to write anything else. please!
person Katinka
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! Laugh out loud funny, clever, great plot, I even got a little weepy during the wedding ceremonyou\'ou\'re a fantastic writer!
person Kiristeen
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh *please* tell me that wasn\'t the end of this story!!????!! And if not, plllleeeeaase tell me you haven\'t given up on it???? I love the heartfelt struggle of the story, neither person (nor author for that matter -- LOL) using the spell to hop into bed, but rather both of them still using their brains and ending up making something of the accident/manipulation.

Oh, and I can *so* see Dumbledor (sp) being a Slitheryn. That man has cunning and manipulation down to an artform.

Kiri

person MichaelsLove
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled across this in someones recommendations, and loved it. Did you ever finish it, and if so, will you update? I\'ld love to know how it all works out.
person DBZVelena
schedule June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!
I loved it very much so.
Great work indeed!
person lynntownsend
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FOR THE LOVE OOD, OD, *PLEASE* UPDATE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story!! Some of the more amazing love scenes that I have read. I am BEGGING you to PLEASE UPDATE!!!! You are a vaery good writer. Keep up the good work.
person Charlotte
schedule April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
- *breath catches* -
..........
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTT??????????
I was wandering back through the older ones and found this... PLEASE tell me you have finished it somewhere.... please don\'t leave me hanging..... *begs*
I really like this one... there are so few truly good fics out there, please, please put up the rest.....
person Laura
schedule March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. Your writing is terrific and I hope that you\'ll finish this. I\'d like to know the outcome.
person Mikee
schedule January 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've now read this story three times. I truly enjoy it, but am stymied. Will you be adding to it. I am so looking forward to finding out what happens when old man Malfoy goes to Hogwarts. I am also looking forward to seeing how the Pledge between Severus and Harry ends up finally being resolved. Please add so the story soon.

Thank you for a wonderful read.