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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all i can sayv is that i realy enjoyed your fanfic.
it\'s nice to read something new once in a while ;3
btw love the way you describer sex, way better than all that descriptive stuff i alway see in other fanfics ;)
it\'s nice to read something new once in a while ;3
btw love the way you describer sex, way better than all that descriptive stuff i alway see in other fanfics ;)
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! but sad, i was bleary eyed from the time albus died on. you...you...you killed him... *sob* almost as bad as in the fifth book. i know its a good fic when i\'ve gotten emotionaly attached to the characters. i hate that you killed him but i will forgive you because you made the castle talk and i love that! and also that you gave them wandless magic! good job on the fic.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Amireal. This is now my favorite fic. I swear, just wow. This fic was in every since of the words \' bloody brilliant \' !
There were a few times where i had to backtrack a few paragraphs because i was confused or something, but other than that, wow.
I have to admit first time that Harry and Sev actually had sex I almost didnt continue reading it, (( dont really like submissive Sev lol )). But I mean, I just couldnt, and I\'m so glad that i didnt seeing as though Severus isnt submissive in this fic.
I love all of the relationships, Harry and Severus are just so incredibly perfect for eachother, the complete one another wonderfully. And their little arguments, on and off banter, name callings, every thing is just adorable!
Ooh and I absoutley LOVE your Dumbledore. Brilliant! He was bloody hysterical, I mean like when he SAT on Sirius. \' Im quite comfortable actually \', holy crap, I DIED! I swear i lyke fell out of my chair n laughed and rolled myself to tears. Gods this fic is amazing, its funny, adorable, has a wonderful plot, and the last few chapters are just wonderful.
Amireal, thank you so much for writing this fic. I absoutley love it! *adds it to recommended reading* - Jessica
There were a few times where i had to backtrack a few paragraphs because i was confused or something, but other than that, wow.
I have to admit first time that Harry and Sev actually had sex I almost didnt continue reading it, (( dont really like submissive Sev lol )). But I mean, I just couldnt, and I\'m so glad that i didnt seeing as though Severus isnt submissive in this fic.
I love all of the relationships, Harry and Severus are just so incredibly perfect for eachother, the complete one another wonderfully. And their little arguments, on and off banter, name callings, every thing is just adorable!
Ooh and I absoutley LOVE your Dumbledore. Brilliant! He was bloody hysterical, I mean like when he SAT on Sirius. \' Im quite comfortable actually \', holy crap, I DIED! I swear i lyke fell out of my chair n laughed and rolled myself to tears. Gods this fic is amazing, its funny, adorable, has a wonderful plot, and the last few chapters are just wonderful.
Amireal, thank you so much for writing this fic. I absoutley love it! *adds it to recommended reading* - Jessica
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My cousin told me to read this a long time ago and...here I am LOL
I must admit that it was very confusing in the beginning but the plot line definately made up for that ^.^ I absolutely loved it ^.^
xoxox,
Liz
I must admit that it was very confusing in the beginning but the plot line definately made up for that ^.^ I absolutely loved it ^.^
xoxox,
Liz
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm....its good and all but its REALLY hard to fallow! So far I got that Harry got attacked by a girl......then SOMETHING seems to happen that make Snape and Harry have sex/feelings/SomethingOfTheSort together? Can\'t you make a falshback or something to help us poor confused readers? And then there was another SOMETHING with this Death Eater..........And WHY would Harry be in his most hated sensai\'s room/class/wherever! just to be insulted, as was the start of your story. Now don\'t get me wrong I really DO like your story its just that it skips a lot and has so much info. missing that its hard to fallow. Please give some help to this!
Ja!
Ja!
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh
My
Stars and Garters.
(That is a ringing endorsement.)
I\'ve spent all day reading this, every moment I\'ve had a chance, and now I want to go back and start all over. I laughed SO HARD, I was glad I wasn\'t drinking something at the time, I would have ruined my computer. I wept, too, and for you to pull of both in one story with me-- I bow to your great writing skills. I hope you\'re a pro. You should be.
My
Stars and Garters.
(That is a ringing endorsement.)
I\'ve spent all day reading this, every moment I\'ve had a chance, and now I want to go back and start all over. I laughed SO HARD, I was glad I wasn\'t drinking something at the time, I would have ruined my computer. I wept, too, and for you to pull of both in one story with me-- I bow to your great writing skills. I hope you\'re a pro. You should be.
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice fic...good story line...thank you
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have just spent the past 5 hours reading this, and *sighs* this is such a cool fic.
You need to go over it though \'cause there are several errors, like partd of words repeades over and over agin, that i\'m guessing is aff\'s fault.
Anywhoos, you wouldn\'t happent to feel like writing a sequel to this, now would you?
It\'s just so amazing and amusing that I cant help but want more.
Seriously, this is THE most amusing harry/snape fic that i have ever read.
You need to go over it though \'cause there are several errors, like partd of words repeades over and over agin, that i\'m guessing is aff\'s fault.
Anywhoos, you wouldn\'t happent to feel like writing a sequel to this, now would you?
It\'s just so amazing and amusing that I cant help but want more.
Seriously, this is THE most amusing harry/snape fic that i have ever read.
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is just perfect. I read this story previously. I\'m reading it again tonight prior to reading \"Bring Me to Life: A Continuation,\" which is suppossed to be a sequal to this story.
The dialogue is wonderful--dry, sarcastic humor at its best. What could be better than (from part 22)---Fudge says, \"Sputtering. \"I can\'t believe you of all people are questioning my loyalties.\" Harry, \"Not your loyalties,\" Allowing a malicious smile, \"just your competence.\"
Severus thinks, \'Funny, he\'d never noticed that vein before.\'
Fudge says, \"Why you-\"
Albus enters and says, \"Why Cornelius, so good to see you again.\"
Severus thinks, \'Albus really should consider changing his wardrobe to include tights and a cape.\'
I would recommend this stoy to anyone who loves a Harry/Snape story infused with affection, caring, and lots of humor. Great reading.
The dialogue is wonderful--dry, sarcastic humor at its best. What could be better than (from part 22)---Fudge says, \"Sputtering. \"I can\'t believe you of all people are questioning my loyalties.\" Harry, \"Not your loyalties,\" Allowing a malicious smile, \"just your competence.\"
Severus thinks, \'Funny, he\'d never noticed that vein before.\'
Fudge says, \"Why you-\"
Albus enters and says, \"Why Cornelius, so good to see you again.\"
Severus thinks, \'Albus really should consider changing his wardrobe to include tights and a cape.\'
I would recommend this stoy to anyone who loves a Harry/Snape story infused with affection, caring, and lots of humor. Great reading.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I hope there's more to this story. It's great on SO many levels. Your humor and dialogue is fabulous.