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by Amireal

schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ohmy gosh... your writing is amazing. I love everything about this. And I've only read the first chapter.
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
brilliance. Hilarious, mind tingling utter brilliance. I always had my suspicions on Dumbles. *smirks.
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a really good story! I loved it. It was very sweet. Question, do you by chance write poems? From the way your write it seems as if you would be very good at them.
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I have enjoyed the hell out of your story it was funny,sexy, hot,downright romatic,sad and thrilling I would love to read more of your writing. Thank you for a couple hours(and couple hours lost sleep) of reading.
person reiben
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read this like 20 times now and every time I do I love it more, you are an amazing writer and You shuld continue to write.
person mu xxx
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... luv the ending. Very sweet. I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Good job. Quite a few spelling mistakes and what not, but not unreadable. Adored Severus's character, he was brilliant (but when is he not!?). ^__^ Good work!!!!!
person kirio
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, so cute to be exact! I really do love it and I can only say: Please keep writing because I think your writing style is really good!
person Kordula
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How is it that such a bloody good story has such few reviews?
This was by far one of the most enthralling stories I've read
in a while. And trust me I've read a lot in the past few months.
The banter between Harry and Severus is absolutely perfect
and I adore Draco, Hermione, and Ron's relationship. The
progression of the bond and its inevitable public knowledge
was so great. The fact that Dumbledore died by being stabbed
perfectly emulated the desperation of a dying cause. And the
bit with putting up the wards and using Harry as an anchor was
genius. The epilogue was brilliant, I love Molly's reactions.
Not to mention the sex scenes. Can we say HOT? I believe
we can.
Thank you so much for sharing this idea and it's utter perfection
with us. I applaud you on a story perfectly executed.
person Reb Riddle
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! wonderful begining middle and ending I loved it all the way through! wonderful
person vbollman(nsi)
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my god, once i started reading this i couldn\'t stop. i loved it. thank you for writing an extremly will thought out story.