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My god, that was BLOODY BRILLIANT! More or I shall hex you! This is by far the most fabulously written hermione/snape story I\'ve ever chanced to come across! MORE!!!!!!!

Liking this story a lot!! I think whatever direction cho choose will be wonderful. I really like your Snape. I like it when he is not fluffy, but his humanity is shown at times such as telling Hermione to hold on during the curse. Very nicely done. Keep it up!

Chapter 11... I do hope that Lucius will get what he has coming to him!!! Interesting stuff happening here!!! I take it that they are both starting to feel something for the other, good thing too considering what they just went through!!! I like how Hermione showed that she is still strong & Severus is ever thinking!!!

Looking forward to chapter 12, Deb >^..^<

I\'ve been waiting for an update forever, and you it it on a cliffy. *pouts* No fair. Come back and write another cha. sc.

Oh goody, Malfoy action.

Interesting with Malfoy\'s wand, imaginative that you explained what it would be like to use another\'s wand. You don\'t see that in stories very often, if at all. This Marriage Law Challenge is unique in that HG has an escape plan, so carefully thought out and so desperate that she would leave her friends and at the same time anticipating the grand adventure of being alone in life with no alternative choice.

I hope she gets offered a choice to be set free. Part of me sees Snape doing this now after this chapter, another part does not. Perhaps you could publish the multiple versions of your story with the alternative paths. How interesting that would be. Especially the path where she implements her plan. I can see how this story could go in several directions. All I can do is wait.

You\'ve done a good job with Snape in this story. Thank you for keeping Malfoy evil.

Black and red roses to you.

Wow! This is one of the best fanfics that I have come across in a while, do you have any ideat tht the length is going to be. Please update soon. Or I will review it relentlessly everyday. I may even have to resort to begging. Please keep up that good work.

P.S. i dont care what the others say i like the way you\'ve written Hermione and Snape. I especially like the bit about her making her own wand, that part is pure genius.

It\'s ok so far, but Hermione is way to OOC. She shouldnt be so rude, especially in regards to the headmaster, or whiney, and she should be more understanding of the situation. I think Hermione\'s lack of canon character removes greatly from the story.

Good chapter... although I didn\'t like the cliffy. I hope you update soon, please?

Bah! Your work is fine! I\'m really glad you\'re taking the time to develop the characters. Being thrust into such a situation wouldn\'t be easy - there has to be a time of transition, right? Taking your time through the story now will just make it better later. Because then we\'ll understand hoe che characters got to that point, instead of guessing and such . . . Then again, I\'m not too bright and that\'s just what I think :P I could be totally wrong. Again, I think it\'s perfectly fine. It\'s better than fine, it\'s excellent :D

Good writing. Have more cookies! :D
Sukkumbus

But...but...but... You left me hangin\' and I don\'t have a good griphat hat if I fall? I hope you can update soon! *Walks away, grumbling about cliffhangers and how they should be outlawed of fanfics*