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for Do What You Have To Do

by tny1111

person Ashley579
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story so far, I was just curious seeing as how its been 6 months if there was any possible chance you are going to write any more. please do.
person PirateAurora
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I'm totally sucked into your story!! How about some more chapters please????? You're doing a wonderful with this story and i'm sure you really need to get some more chapters out of your system!! ;-)
person Kitty
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not a writer, but an avid reader who is expanding their horizons. Thanks for all the good work.
person countrymouse
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wow, and wow. I am really enjoying this one. Quite different, and dark, but with delicious little hints of what may be in store. What will Malfoy do next? How will Voldemort react to Snape's marriage? Can Snaeep eep her safe? Will she allow him to---some of Hermione's actions here seem a bit foreign to the sensible. level-headed girl I've come to think of her as---such as being so thought as as to push away from her new husband at their wedding to run off into the arms of another man, without thinking either of how that looked to Snape or what a public insult it was to the man whom she had just admitted in her thoughts was "putting his life at risk by marrying her". Or such as stubbornly leaving his rooms to go on a midnight jaunt to the Astronomy tower when he had just warded them for her safety. Or is the explanation that she is still bouncing off the walls mentally from the shock of her parents' death, from her enforced marriage, and the loss of her dreams and her liberty? I also wonder if you're going to have her come to her senses in time to get her tail back down to Severus' chambers, or if he's going to come back and find her gone, which seems to me would then demand that he realize she must have another wand and her loss of it as well? And how ugly would such a confrontation as that get???

As I said, I can't wait to find out the answers to all these rid. P. Please do, do, update soon!!!
person rbrlubber
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You\'re doing such a good job at capturing the Snape and Hermione\'s characters that I\'ve been sucked right in. Unfortunately, I\'ve read up to where you left off and I\'m hungry for more. Please consider adding new chapters...at least the wedding night! I can\'t hold my breath much longer!
person sushified
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. I would type more but it`s so late at night I`ll wake everyone up in the house. I`ve been reading for a while now, all 16 chapters. I can`t wait for more. Please let them have more intimate encounters!
person Gundamwinggirl
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A great story from a great writer. I hope that you can continuis sis soon with another chapter, can\'t wait to see sparks fly between Hermione and Severus!
person loveofmusic
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow great story. I can\'t wait to read what happens next. Keep up the good job.
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know what to say. I absolutely adore the way you portray Snape. I\'m in love...not that I wasn\'t before. Anyways. I read the whole thing as fast as I could, and now I just have to hope that you update SOON. Please? I love this story so much.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16... I really do feel bad for both Hermione & Ron!!! They have a lot to deal with & to think about!!! I like how you wrote Ginny in this chapter, her trying to be the voice of reason & trying to keep things under control, WELL DONE!!!

I do like how you wrote the part that Severus took Draco\'s wand & thought that all of his problems were solved.... if he only knew;-)

I am looking forward to thetineting between Severus & Voldy, can\'t wait to see how that goes!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<