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Hhhhmm continues to be interesting. Severus isn\'t really being very nice is he? I do hope he revises his opinion of Hermione upwards soon, presumably he will have to!! It\'s so refreshing to see such a dark tale as a result of challenge. I hope Hermione continues to be bitter about the whole business - she isnt getting a lot of support is she? And what will Ron and Harry? y?

Just a couple of niggles - its rigours not riggers; and I am wondering just what Dumbledore would be able to do even if she did come and complain about a vigorous sex life (and why couldnt they heal the damage so there would be no traces post-obliviate?) bearing in mind the contents of chapter one where you established that no one was doing anything about murder rape and the use of unforgiveables. Why wouldnt Severus just put her under Imperius, for instance, to keep her quiet if he really were a Deatheater. I think that is something that needs drawint a t a bit. I can see what you are getting at about not blowing his cover as a deatheater with Dumbledore, but I don\'t think it is quite there yet.

Look forward to reading the rest though.

This has been such a great story! I am hoping to read more soon though....(hinthinthint)

Awesome and great idea with the timeturner. Way to make things work for you! *kudos*
Please post more soon, or I might cry. And you wouldn\'t want that, now would you. :P

Suk

Awesome story so far. It seems to have great promise!! I hope you update a lot, It would make me happy!!!!!

This is superb. I like the way it picks up on the downsides of such an idea. Hermione is an intelligent girl and also has lots of common sense, two things which don\'t always go together. She has picked up on the signs this time hasn\'t she. Just out of curiosity is there anyone else out there who would like to make a close investigation of Fudge\'s left forearm.

Very well done! I absolutely adore your Hermione. She\'s doing what I *hope* I would do in her position. Can\'t wait to find out how this all turns out.


Kiri

Very good story, however, it\'s the \"Daily Prophet\", not Profit.

I like your take on the challenge. My only complaint is that it is similar to thery Iry I was going to write when I got round to it, and now I can\'t!!


I agree with your take on it though. She wouldnt take the news very well at all.

The name Kaitlyn is Celtic/Gaelic for Pure

Actually Kaitlyn is the Irish form of Cateline, the old French form of Katherine. The meaning of the name Katherine is disputed. Some think torture, some pure, others think it is derived from the Goddess Hecate\'s name.

Other than your misinformation, your story is good. I love the stories this challenge has produced. They are all great. Includeing yours. Keep up the good writing!

HOLY CRAP, she is PISSED!!! I can\'t believe that she broke her wand!!! What plans are Albus working on? What\'s going to happen now? Hoping for more SOON!!! Deb >^..^<