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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this. A fiecerly indepdent Heromine whom the author doesn\'t twist into some sex-nut and a biting, cold, snarly Serveus. >:) If the possibility exists the two do become \'closer\', it better be after a few chapters with SOME sort of bonding between the two.
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November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! I\'m so frustrated right along side Hermione!!! LOL (good chapter) Furious at how she\'s being manipulated, and hoping beyond hope that Hermione takes control, just like she planned. In otherwords, you sucked me in and made me feel. Can\'t wait to find out what else is going to happen.
Kiri
Kiri
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I laughed my head off at this chapter. Damn this was funny! Don\'t know if that was your intentions or not but I couldn\'t help but laugh. This was good. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I like this story. I love the virginity part thrown in. I can\'t wait to see these two after they get married. Poor Hermione has to go to the dungeons so she can play the dutiful wife. LMAO
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A story takes as long as it takes. They don\'t punch time clocks. If anyone gpushpushy, tell them to sod off!
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s offical - I\'m addicted. I hate it when I read the first four chapters of a story and realise I\'m an idiot for hoping it would magicly sprout more chapters as I was reading. Grraagg It\'s late, and I am exhausted. Great story and I look forward to more!
One question though - WHen will they snog?!?!
One question though - WHen will they snog?!?!
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'re take on this challenge is intriguing and the fact that it involves only witches does make it more horrible. Oh and Bravo to not having Severus suddenly jump out of character, I thisthis being a slow process and thus making the whole thing plausible. Thanks.
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness i love your fic it is awesome please update it is awesome with so many twists just remember it is okay if it goeses at this pace its fast enough a good pace but man ou left an evil cliff
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I REALLY like it!!! The whole bit about her being a virgin was FABULOUS!!! I really thought it was classic how she gave the final answer on the subject, in terms of unicorns... too good!!! Can\'t wait to see how the hearing goes, Sev with attitude, Hermione with even more attitude, Malfoy won\'t know what hit him;-) Til next chapter, Deb >^..^<
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
u write well....great plot....i cant wait for teh next chapter
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not slow in the least. I really like the sarcastic \'a nice Death Eater\' comment. I can picture the smirk on his face while saying it, not meaning himself of course. Great job. Keep it up!