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I\'m okay with her not choosing Ron and I understand why, because you wrote it so beautifully. I was only on his side because you wrote him so well. I have one humble request, please don\'t not turn Ron into an obsessed, violent pratt out for revenge. Your non-prat Ron was so refreshing, it was such a nice change. Thanks.

Oh, no! You didn\'t let them ran away with Ron ::cries::
It would have been so wonderful, brave and romantic! ::cries more::

- from a devoted SS/HG shipper

While I enjoyed this, I do want to point out that Hermione had just pushed Ron

awww...man. what will she do now?
wow ..of all the fics with this challenge yours is the most different with that whole ron aspect being so strong. and its by far one of the better ones of the challenge. man..as much as i dont read rw/hg fics im kinda rooting for ron..though that isnt going to happen unfortunately..but hey snape is looking quite nift in this fic and so does whatever plans voldemort might have for them. please do write more soon. thanks.

*eyelids sellotaped to forehead*
*eyes stuck to screen*
*coffee jar at ready*
WHAT WHAT WHAT?!?!?!

NEED... MORE!

*sings insanely* Do what you have to dooooo...

*hits self in face with wok*
*dances around room clutching coffee mug*

More soon!

Am hooked!

ciao,
fish

Chapter 5 is GREAT!!! Ron really showed what he mademade of here, so very touching!!! It finally has become obvious just how long he has really cared about her. I know that he is in for a lot of hurt, if she couldn\'t kiss him, how can she even consider marrying him? I know that she will be able to say that the law wouldn\'t allow it because of his age, but it will still hurt him!!! 1 Favor, find him someone soon that will heal his heart!!!

Til your next update, Deb >^..^<

That was sweet. See, you addressed the thing that I always thought about these marriage law stories... why doesn\'t Ron ask Hermione to marry him? I am VERY interested to see how you finish this.
Unlike many on this site, I like Ron. I think he is sweet.

Keep writing.

This is good! This is so good, I am out of words. Please make them do something to break free? I know the challenge is for SS/HG, but would you make it RW/HG? Pwetty pwease? Have them run away and have those pseudo good and bad ppl choke on \"their\" corresponding \"causes\" and all that?

Now, I\'m pulling for Ron (and it is very possibly my own fault *smile*). Ron was so sweet. I don\'t like Ron, how could I let you do this to me? You are a very skilled writer. Thanks.

I just read this story and wanted to let you know that I am enjoying it very much. I like the approach you are taking with the challenge, and find it very refreshing. It\'s so much easier to do a PWP type of tale for these things, that to take the time and develop something deeper is remarkable. ( Not that I don\'t like PWP tales, love them actually.) I am looking forward to reading the next chapter and I hope you post it soon. (Don\'t feel any pressure to rush now! HURRY!! ~eek sorry)

Now, I shall sign off and shamelessly exercise a bit of self promotion, I remain

Sincerely,
Titania
author of
Travels with Severus; Severus does New Orleans posted on AFF.net