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for Hermione pulls it off

by Shiv5468

person Gwennavierre
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good story! I enjoyed every word of it! Though I must argue with you about Severus not being tall, dark and handsome. I happen to think crooked noses, black eyes, pale skin and silky black hair make any man handsome, so when you put those features on Severus, you have a god!! :-D *sigh* What I would do e ine in Hermione\'s place in this story...
Bravo!

Hugs,
Gwen
person CAH
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
outstanding story - please continue and hurry with the next update!!
person tny1111
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to see this relationship develop!!
person Talene
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! ROFLMAO!!! More? Please more??
person Aoibheann
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!!!! Especially this part: \"Severus, she filed away for future reference, is a bit of a drama queen. Although, to be fair, anyone could have worked that out from the way he flounced into potion
person kate
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Severus, she filed away for future reference, is a bit of a drama queen. Although, to be fair, anyone c hav have worked that out from the way he flounced into potion
person Tanya
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far!! I love it! I\'m very curious as to where you\'re going to take this conversation... as amusing as it is, I wouldn\'t mind for it to speed up and get to the *ahem* good stuff... Update soon!
Tanya~
person Hawklaw
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Not as enthrallingly hilarious or detailed as \"Dirty Deeds,\" but I always enjoy your fics. I like your view of a strong, in charge Hermione, and you are a talented writer. Now, off to finish your other fics -- and I\'ll volunteer for ironing duty if necessary.
person rubberduck
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was fun. it was very amusing to hear about the antics of hogwarts and the wager. and i especially liked hearing how dumbledore was put down. but i didn\'t like how cynical hermione was. especially about the the gryffindor boys sexual prowess. i\'m going to assume that she didn\'t sleep with any of them in her time at the school, so how is it possible she would just, out of hand, condemn them all to such ineptude? anyway, that was a good way to end if that is indeed the end. it was fitting. but if it continues i will look forward to reading more.
person Sarah
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh!

I clicked on this for the Blackadder reference, and I wasn\'t disappointed... until I realised it\'s not done yet! I *adore* your narrative voice here: \"cunning as a fox\" is quite appropriate. It\'s rather like a game ofer, er, isn\'t it? Can\'t wait to find out who\'s bluffing who.