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I like it. Its just sooooooooooo Hermione. Almost everything is well thought out, sensible and just right. Yet the are hints of unpredictibleness, like Snape kissing her. She wasn\'t expecting that. And the descriptions of Harry and Ron were just great! Also Hermione\'s descriptions of the \'help\' she got from various students. And I ADORE the fact that after she lent Pansy the feminist books, Draco got a slapping. Brilliant!!! Can\'t wait for more.

great chapter. very funny. the flirting and innuendos were hilarious. even harry and ron spying, although with harry growing up in a muggle world for the first 11 years of his life, i don\'t think he would dress so outlandish if he was TRYING to be discreet. and damn anyone who would bad mouth your characterizations eh? i mean really. lol. pansy is such a bad influence on hermione.

Ahhh now this is a really really good hr/ss fic....can you jsut quit your job and any life you may have and write??? not that I could pay you or anything....but hey its an idea....

I enjoy this story, thanks.

OH Shiv, I am so sorry I paired you with Ron in my challenge fic. This chapter was worth the wait! I loved it and want more.

Bollocks on the \"Hermione wouldn\'t say anything bad about Gryffindor boys\" reviewer\'s comment, as well-intentioned as I\'m sure it was. Your Hermione is SPOT ON! Smarter than anyone is willing to give credit for (because it will invariably make them feel very uncomfortable, as it should), honest and too-frequently overlooked for the very reasons that she is what she is (an intelligent woman whose priorities are different than the entertainment and fashion industries would like), she is finally going after exactly what she wants! Just as with any of her assignments, she has logically and methodically broken down the process and is attacking the situation as only a true over-achiever can.
an\'an\'t wait to see what future dates hold for our couple. My appreciation for your work makes me want to beg for lots and lots of chapters very soon but I know that everyone has their own pace for writing. I do hope to see an update in the near future; this story is (as yours typically are) great fun!

Two Shiv updates in one day? ::dancing with abject joy:: Absolutely freaking hilarious! So--when are they going to have \"coffee?\"

Nice first da I I like awkward Snape -- something endearing about him. Can\'t wait for more!!

Shiv honey, I think you should blythly ignore anyone who tells you how to write your characters. The fact is, we all have our preconcieved notions of how these people would behave, think, whatever, but the minute we start writing them they are going to be different from the way JKR writes them, because we aren\'t JKR. I love your stories, love your interpretation of the canon characters and consider it all a lovely alternate universe with its own validity and life. You write, in fact, my favorite Hermione, outside of JKR, and I sdore her in all the stories you have have written. Keep going, ignore everything but the warrented praise and adulation and go forth and conquer.

You know if anything you\'re adding to my vocabulary. First Nevilles, and now I\'ll have \"coffee drinking\" as a euphemism for sex for a good long while.

Can just imagine her taking both Harry and Ron by the ears. It\'s about time.