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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank Gods for tea, eh? Delicious as always, Shiv. Nice one. Kait x
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I AM GOING TO SCREAMMMM!!!!!!! Of all the SS/HG\'s you\'ve written, the cottage by the ocean is so overwhelmingly suggestive and so clear in my mind that I cannot BELIEVE you stopped them both like that!!! You cruel, heartless author! WHY WHY WHY did you stop??! If you don\'t keep writing this one, oh my god, I\'o ito it myself! Don\'t make me come over there and write for Hermione Granger! Good GOD, continue this one or I will die of frustration! A cottage! The ocean! The moon....argh! Keep writing!!!
Yours in great admiration, Hephastus
Yours in great admiration, Hephastus
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this fic so far, hope you update vewy soon... Like the way you\'ve portrayed Sev and Herm, also like the way the plot is developing...
More soon?
Pwease?
More soon?
Pwease?
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter Shiv. I love how you extol the virtues of coffee and tea. What other ragerages are next? Water, perhaps. Champagne, soda?
Fun fic. One of my personal favLoveLove the humor.
Cheers dear!
Fun fic. One of my personal favLoveLove the humor.
Cheers dear!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*giggles*
I\'d practically forgotten this story. It\'s brilliant! And this last chapter was superb.
There are echoes of the relationship in ... oh ... Celebration (I have trouble remembering titles) - the mutual caring, in the literal physical sense of the word caring. Pretty.
I like your characterisation of Hermione\'s mum particularly. This strikes me as the most likely characterisation - rather like my mother, actually, which is highly plausible when you consider the similarities of the eleven-year-old girls they brought up ... where was this sentance going? Oh yes. She\'s highly plausible and extremely likely, and I hope we actually meet her at some point.
The by-play about murdering Hermione\'s father appeals to my sense of humour a *lot*. *snigger*
One teeny tiny point - an error in a couple of the early chapters which is highly uncharacteristic of you. You refer to the \"teacher\'s\" doing x,y,z ... I know you\'re purveying lemons, but is a greengrocer\'s apostrophe strictly necessary? ;) (Sorry. Bad joke. Bad Jenny.)
Anyway, lovely story, lovely chapters.
Lovely Shiv, doing all this updating. :)
I\'d practically forgotten this story. It\'s brilliant! And this last chapter was superb.
There are echoes of the relationship in ... oh ... Celebration (I have trouble remembering titles) - the mutual caring, in the literal physical sense of the word caring. Pretty.
I like your characterisation of Hermione\'s mum particularly. This strikes me as the most likely characterisation - rather like my mother, actually, which is highly plausible when you consider the similarities of the eleven-year-old girls they brought up ... where was this sentance going? Oh yes. She\'s highly plausible and extremely likely, and I hope we actually meet her at some point.
The by-play about murdering Hermione\'s father appeals to my sense of humour a *lot*. *snigger*
One teeny tiny point - an error in a couple of the early chapters which is highly uncharacteristic of you. You refer to the \"teacher\'s\" doing x,y,z ... I know you\'re purveying lemons, but is a greengrocer\'s apostrophe strictly necessary? ;) (Sorry. Bad joke. Bad Jenny.)
Anyway, lovely story, lovely chapters.
Lovely Shiv, doing all this updating. :)
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awe...why\'d they have to stop? 5 date rule or something? thanks for the update.
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My mouth was going a bit dry there as well. I think I need a good strong cuppa, myself. He fell asleep, that was really sweet and a greater compliment than he might ever know.
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5... It s ths that things are moving along quite nicely for these 2!!! I do hope that Severus will take that holiday!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The best chapter yet, and this is my favourite of all the stories you\'ve got going! Can\'t wait to read more! :)
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I hope that you decide to keep updating. *_*