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God love you, you had him cook my favorite supper for her!!! Of course, I don\'t, erm, massage my chicken with quite the same effect, but given my audience (3 young girls), that\'s probably for the best.

And good for you that it wasn\'t all perfectly timed synchronized bliss but it was wonderful just the same. Besotted, sappy, messy, awkward.... just like the best parts of real life.

Thanks for ending this with a lovely bit of happily ever after!

Hee, hee - not the best of first times, but good enough. Kicked him off the bed...funny. Thanks.

Chapter 6... What a PERFECTLY WONDERFUL ending!!! I have very much enjoyed this story & am looking forward to updates on your other FABULOUS pieces!!! Deb >^..^<

You\'ve a lovely knack for making what was billed as an abrupdingding on your lj not seem abrupt at all. I suppose that this Hermione may do all right with a sunset and marriage and babies ...eventually.

And so ends one of my favorites. It was all good but I especially liked the realism of the situation, so few people can (or will) write it like that.

AHHHH! You\'re still writing this, right? Please say you are! I totally love this. I have read a couple of the \"Gryffindor Stud\" Challenges in which Hermione does all of the things she refuses to do in this story and I must say that I appreciate your version a lot more. It seems much more \'Hermione.\' Especially since Hermione would definitely be more concerned with a long-term relationship with Snape, as opposed to winning a silly contest. Please keep writing. Umm... however in the last chapter when Snape is touching her breasts maybe you could be a little more descriptive? You know, like describe what she\'s feeling, what the sensations are like, exactly what he\'s doing... even a physical description. I know that you meant that scene to me more tender than necessarily full-blown sexuality. However, with a little more it could be both. I think that you are a very talented writer and I can\'t wait to read more. I love your wit. :D

Very enjoyable! I find the idea of Snape and Hermione together intriguing som somewhat unexpected, and this is among the best Potterverse fics I\'ve read. Extremely witty and vastly amusing! I\'m glad you didn\'t throw them in the sack almost right away as some other writers have done - it wouldn\'t have been quite believable for these two characters. Morrrrrre please, prrretty please with a rrrolling Finnish rrrr!

Wonderful second date. Loved the wifely skills comment. Nice that they are taking it slow (even if it\'s faster than they thought they would.)

Snape\'s character is fascinating and Hermione gives the impression of hiding us a couple of things.
I\'m so happy you didn\'t abandon that story!
Please keep going.

why did they have to stop? why?
lol, brilliant and witty as ever, *bows down*

***Seva***