rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

snarktastic, absolutely.
charactarization was spot on and it was a lovely, smooth read.

cheers
mei

That was one of the most awsome HG/SS pairing stories I have ever read! I loved how you focused on the story more than the smut and the smut was so sweet and loving! Hermione was perfectly in character and Severus was too..ltholthough at times he was slightly OOC)
Ron and Harry with the \"Be nice to her or else\" gig was a really nice touch. It\'s important that they remained friends even though she was dating the \"old bat\"
I positivly love this story and I think it\'s the best thing I\'ve read in a while now!
I love stories with a good plot and this was no exception to what I like!
This was awsome! I absolutely loved it! I can\'t say that enough! I LOVED this story!
(Maybe you could do an epilogue???)
I love it so much!

LOL...ok...I\'m a sucker.....I fell for it......I was expecting a long and drawn out story and got a slow courtship culminating with copulation and their entire life summarized in less than one paragraph....good job it was a pleasant little story....I wish you had allowed life to happen or at least given us everyones reaction to them, but I am happy with it and feel oddly satisfied...thanks for a wonderful read.

Great ending to a most fun, well-written story, Shiv! Loved it.

Wonderful Shiv. Truly beautiful.

Aww... wonderful ending. You know you\'re evil don\'t you? Distracting me from my thesis with an update.

Please give me more distractions soon. I\'d rather be reading your fanfic than writing my proposal!

Just the image of Severus naked as the day he was born fretting in the kitchen sent me into peals of laughter. Most entertaining! I like your take on the challenge. Good work.
Da Feather

Hiya Shiv, just a note regarding when she\'s thinking about the possibility of them being lovers...\"epithet\" means an insult. Unless she thinks being called Severus\' lover is a putdown, ya might want a different word. ;-)

Joan

*Standing ovations all around for Shiv!* Once again, your razor sharp wit has made this story a pleasure to read. Nearly pissed myself at the mental picture of Hermione kicking Snape out of the bed *snicker* But on a more serious note, I find your fics to be wonderfully written in such a way that you really take the time to not only to develop the plot but ultiultivate Severus and Hermione\'s characters to compliment one another without feeling forced or false. For that, I thank you. Your Hermione is by far, my favorite, she is such a pleasing combination of determined, fierce young woman mixed with innocence. And Snape, well, he\'s Snape at his finest - need I say more?