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for I\'ll Forget You

by SnapesDream

person Grill
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this fic! You go, Severus, win her back! And Hermione: wake up!
Hopefully seeing Ron with the blonde girl - is it Luna? it's Luna, isn't it? - will shake some sense into her! Go running to Severus for comfort!!
Please, PLEASE update this story! Keep updating and I'll keep reviewing!

Need more sexy Severus! ;) So Hermione, get moving, you know you want to...!
person Nazzy
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated this. I think Hermione has been something of a jerk. You really can't blame the reviewers for being hard on her since you have only showed little of what happened. All we know is she left him some note sayint "It was fun," which that in itself is enough to make her look like an asshole.

Regardless of what their relationship wake bke before she left him, they never communicated and now she is back in his life, a married woman. I don't know why authors have to have him always crawling begging to her, when half the time she was just as much to blame for some break-up than him.
person spaz141
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Who is she kidding, she won\'t stay away. Thanks for the update. So what horrible thing is Ron doing while away all the time?
person ancientgirl
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey thanks for updating this story. The thing that bothers me about Hermione here is that she seems to resent Severus, but does she not realize her parting words to him were incredibly cruel. Regardless of the fact that they were both too scared to tell each other how they felt and that niether wanted to be the one to say \"please stay\", she\'s the one who said \"its been fun\" and that is probably the most cruel thing you can say at the end of the relationship. It makes what they shared sound like a game. I\'m still hopeing she does some crawling and begging, and hell she should even apologize for saying that. Sorry that\'w I w I feel.

But all that aside I love your story. I hope you don\'t keep us waiting too long for another update.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 7, Chapter 6... I am glad to see that Severus is making positive progress & am looking forward to seeing how his potion works when he completes it!!!

WHY does Hermione stay with Ron... they are not very together for the most part, so what is the point?!? There is so much between her & Severus, when will she realize that he is who she belongs with?!? I am hoping that they will do something about it SOON!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<
person spaz141
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 6, Chapter 5... That went over like a ton of bricks, but at least she got him to agree to try!!! I am looking forward to seeing how the progress for Remus goes from both ends as well as seeing what happens the next time Severus & Hermione are alone together!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
person ancientgirl
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not quite sure why she left him in the first place. In the t cht chapter it seems like he is giving her a choice, so clearly he\'s wanting her to stay but not wanting to force her. She is the one who decided for whatever reason to leave and so I can understand his resentment towards her. I don\'t understand though why she couldnn\'t seem to understand though.
person ancientgirl
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I knew I forgot to say something. I\'m hoping there will be some groveling for Hermione since Severus has indeed been living with \"Its been fun\" for the past what 10 or 11 years. Please don\'t make him the one to chase after her.
person spaz141
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks.