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Wow, looks like this is shaping up to be a great story. You\'ve definately peaked my curiousity. I hope you add more soon.

Scare tactics never work for Hermione Granger. Foolish man, Severus Snape! This is a good hook, and lead in. I will enjoy your unraveling of the mystery.

Oh,my. So is Percy a spy? Or does Dumbledore already know he\'s a deatheater? Or is Dumbledore really on the side of the dark? I hope you\'ll be able to update soon.

I thought this was very well written; and I\'m intrigued by the idea of Severus either having to chase down Hermione or having to run with her. But, you have a big problem to solve with the plot--and I realize you may already have figured out how you\'re going to do it. The moment they tell her or she realizes they don\'t believe her; she just has to say one word: Veritaserum. I also think you need a little bit more explanation as to why everyone would believe Percy over Hermione, when (at least in the books) she\'s done far more than he has to fight Voldemort. The Weasleys could, of course, be showing loyalty to a family member; but Albus, Harry, Minerva, etc. would have to have extremely good reasons to think Hermione is lying.
I hope you have, or will, figure out how to solve this, because you have a very intriguing idea here with loads of possibilities.

Great start! I\'ll be watching for updates.