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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good lord. This was just fantastic.
I sincerely hope that there is going to be more!
I sincerely hope that there is going to be more!
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! I loved this. Sleek and erotic. Please, please a sequel? I\'d love to \"see\" the two get completely together. Wonderful job.
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brillant. I would love to hear your take on their subsequent \"conversation.\" Not to mention, who gets the potion? The choices...
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is good...this is real good. Are you planning more or a one time thing? I love it.
Red
Red
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oi, goodness woman, if you can write that well about Hermione getting herself off, when Snape gets her off (hint hint) it\'s gonna send us girls through the roof. None of this one shot nonsense, you must write more! :D
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Goodness. As if my fear with PWP, I\'m afraid you aren\'t going to post anything else in this GREAT little story. I *know* you said it was a PWP, but for the love of all that is smutty, I want more! *pants and thinks about phone sex* Yeah - post more? *whew*
That was freakin\' hot - great job!
Karena ELizabeth
That was freakin\' hot - great job!
Karena ELizabeth
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is NOT a one-shot!! It CAN\'T be!! lol I love this story and it\'s a VERY good first attempt...better than good! I would like it oh so much better if you CONTINUED lol.lol. This line, btw, \"Snape smirked; somehow he
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Are you planning on adding more? That was fabulous! Excellent for a first time PWP!!!
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, lovely, lovely and even better because it is NOT PWP. PWP, though fun, is not terribly engaging or have the same resonance as stories which have beautifully drawn characters and growth and change in those characters and their relationships. Of course, you do realize, since your story had all that, you are now obligated to write the sequel, right? Please?
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please, can you write some more? Its wonderfull. I love it!! PLEASE pretty Please????