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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More, please! Cant believe this is your first story, you are sooo gifted!
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a unique idea, and an enjoyable read. This was rec\'d on a yahoo group so I followed the link here. Well written and kept my eyes glued to the screen. It would be lovely to see this developed into more than just a one-shot.
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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
pray, continue
I am recommendihis his on my group
I am recommendihis his on my group
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that was positively orgasmic! Just the one thing: Snape saying \'baby\' just...isn\'t...right... But other than that it\'s a kick-ass chapter. I\'d like a bottle of that potion when he\'s finished. You rock girl!
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great googly moogly woman,
what are you trying to do, kill me!!
One shot smut, I don\'t think so!!
I am willing to beg, plead, seel a couple of organs,
Whatever it takes to make you carry on with this story!!
Fantastic!!
Kisses
GrrArrg
what are you trying to do, kill me!!
One shot smut, I don\'t think so!!
I am willing to beg, plead, seel a couple of organs,
Whatever it takes to make you carry on with this story!!
Fantastic!!
Kisses
GrrArrg
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh yummy. Good job for your first PWP. Actually, plain old good job. More please! *fans self*
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes - that speech in person with that voice - yes it would be effective. More, please.
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story deserves to be continued, if only for Hermione to truly lose her virginity. I enjoyed how you gave us Snape\'s thoughts and then his spoken words. I hope the other people in the room here didn\'t notice my quickened breathing as I read the climax. Thanks for the story.
Kim
Kim
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOT THAT GREAT??
Please tell me that was a facetious comment. Good night, author, that was perfect! Hot, unusual but not squicky, and ended beautifully!
Hoping we\'ll be able to read how that talk between them goes... NOT A HINT, I\'M BEGGING!!
Please tell me that was a facetious comment. Good night, author, that was perfect! Hot, unusual but not squicky, and ended beautifully!
Hoping we\'ll be able to read how that talk between them goes... NOT A HINT, I\'M BEGGING!!
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was really excellent. You have never wrote like this before? Well you definitely should do it more often. Bloody brilliant.