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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was afraid this had been abandoned, but your A/N reassured me. Based on the success of both chapters, please consider yourself (and Jason) thanked most heartily.
I\'m looking forward to what I hope is the inevitable meeting of the -- er -- minds. I\'m enjoying the inner turmoil and monologues nearly as much as your extremely talented smut; it\'s not easy to do an equally gjob job describing the sex AND the emotions.
Looking forward to your next update!
I\'m looking forward to what I hope is the inevitable meeting of the -- er -- minds. I\'m enjoying the inner turmoil and monologues nearly as much as your extremely talented smut; it\'s not easy to do an equally gjob job describing the sex AND the emotions.
Looking forward to your next update!
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All I can think is \"WOW!\" Thank God I don\'t have my heat turned up or I\'d be a melted puddle in my chair right now. Please, keep going!
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2...... THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!! I am so happy that you are continuing this EXTREMELY HOT piece of work!!! I even went back & re-read the 1st aga again, this whole thing has made my cheeks warm!!! Part 2 was just as good as part 1!!! The thought of watching him & then hearing him calling her name, DAMN I r I really can\'t wait until part 3!!! Of course I will probably re-read from part 1 again.... I think I will have to save that until I know my husband will be home;-) Probably should have saved this for tomorrow night, he just left for work:( Til Chapter 3, Deb >^..^<
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More please? I can\'t wait for more!! Very nice work!
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December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I beg to differ with you madam, on several points...
1. That was MOST excellent
2. That damn well better NOT be one shot! This demands and deserves more!
Now, get off your patootie and write it!
Zee
1. That was MOST excellent
2. That damn well better NOT be one shot! This demands and deserves more!
Now, get off your patootie and write it!
Zee
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow - that one sneaks up on you. Very cleverly executed and beautifully written. Have you written otworkworks? This does beg a sequel.
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very very hot! I confess I was disappointed that SS did not obtain, shall we sa"rel"release,\" but perhaps that is for another story? It was certainly true to the situation. More, please. Please?
Candygirl
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was an interesting idea. Snape\'s sexy, silky voice is frequently a focus of arousal. But this is the first time I\'ve read it being used as the sexual tool.
Wish I\'d thought of it first! :-P
Wish I\'d thought of it first! :-P
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Are you sure you don\'t want to continue? :)
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please continue writing, you write well and keep your characters in character. more please!