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for Parvus Obitus

by darnedchild

person AureliaFlint
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! I nearly choked on my tea when I read the line \'not the idiot, please not the idiot.\' Very funnyThe next chapter should be very interesting~!
person shinyquarter
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmmmm, that last part gave me shivers. I can\'t wait for the rest! pleasepleaseplease don\'t take too long!
person Snapeaholic
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooo HOT! I\'m sorry to see it ending so soon, but it\'s been one hell of a ride! Please update it soon! Can\'t wait to get into more smut! Hehehe...
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4... I am sorry to hear that this story is almost complete, I am very much enjoying it!!! This chapter was GOOOOOD!!! You have done a WONDERFUL job of making it interesting & written Hermione so very well, frustration from the potion\'s effects & all!!! I don\'t think that I\'ve ever read such a FABULOUS bit of Hermione shutting down Harry Potter!!! I am very much looking forward to chapter 5 & finding out exactly how Severus \"helps\" relieve Hermione!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<

person Hawklaw
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...more, more, more! This is a great story!
person Anna Marie
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK I love It!!! Please please tell me your going to be updating this . I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Wonderful story!
person Topaz
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love that last line about \"watching Severus\'s fingers for all those years.....\". You\'ve definitely got a hit with this story. Looking forward to more!
person FriendlyQuark
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, put that way how can he refuse? LOL. Poor Hermione! It would have been so much better for her if only she had been able to get him some other way. Darn Voldy!
person Mel
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Ouch. Help. Poor girl... *eye twitches*

person MsPixie
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This fic is absolutely fascinating ... I firmly believe I am addicted.
You have a wonderful style of writing and every chapter represents it\'s own little world. Completely absorbing!
Mmmh, I guess Hermione will need some help to \'counteract\' the potion? I can\'t wait!
But in the meantime, you have me at the edge of my seat with this wonderful fic, waiting patienly for your update.
Love&Respect
MP