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for Parvus Obitus

by darnedchild

person otherside
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my *fans face* voldemort on a cold day indeed! your story was lemon-fresh as well as funny at times, can\'t wait for the epiloge!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 5... I find it hard to believe that this is your 1st time writing lemons because this is ABSOLUTELY DELICIOUS!!! I LOVE the way that you drew it out, the uncertainty & then.... let\'s just say it is BEYOND HOT!!! I will most definately be looking forward to part 6!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person kimberly
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gods! You are so wonderful. I think my heart is beating faster than Hermione\'s must have been. I have adored this story and was elated to see an update. I feel sorry to see it coming to an end, but you have been a wonderful storyteller, and it has been a fullfilling read. Thank you so much.
person SJL
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM

That was the funniest sex scenaio I\'ve ever read, and I mean that in the best possible way. The humour made the sex more... grounded somehow, as the situation called for a realease of tension on more than one level, and it was all very appealing. It made me smile a lot.

And Albus not looking was priceless. I can\'t wait for more.
person FriendlyQuark
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned how much I love this story. I like the little awkwardnesses you wrote in, the realistic fears and the difficulty of getting out of clothes. This was both sweet and sexy. Well done.
person Estrilda
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow - the chapter was amazing and then the end was hilario I c I can just see them gathered around the fireplace trying to get an update.
person aprilgrey
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is very sweet and very funny. It\'s a wonderful story! Thank you.
person Shinigami
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very well done. I\'m a recent SS/HG fan. Please do continue, and by the way, you left a very good cliffhanger.
person Zee
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Settle?

Settle?

Geez - I would love to \'settle\'...

OKay - down to the nitty gritty!!!! We want SMUT!!!!
person MsPixie
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chapter. You had me laughing (even though I probably shouldn\'t laugh at Hermione\'s situation) and worried. But, I love the outcome *wink* and can\'t wait for the next chapter. I think you have a great stynd Ind I enjoy reading your fic immensely. Hopefully there will be many more to come. :)
Love&Respect
MP