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for Parvus Obitus

by darnedchild

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part Six - Epilogue... I have very much enjoyed this story & the Epilogue was PERFECT!!! I look forward to reasing your future works!!! PLEASE email me when you post your next story*
person deblovesdragon
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! A happy ending.
Thank for for this fic. It was fun!
Cheers.
person Estrilda
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks . the story was lovely.
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a GREAT fic! I\'m adding it to my list of favorites, and I especially loved the inner dialogue that Snape continued to have....


That is wrong on so many levels


Oh, so TRUE!
person MsPixie
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First Lemon? Well, you might consider a career in the citrus-field because that was excellent! ;) Yave ave a way of keeping the reader interested and on the edge of their seat. So, I
person brittni
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, i lov this so much!!

\"Oh, Harry, do shut up, I\'m not going to look and neither are you.\"

i love that part, i laughed right out loud when i read it! ^_^ and severus was really caring about it all! plz plz plz, keep going!!!

brittni
person Jenny
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Coo - hot lemons (sounds like a cure for a cold, not something ... well ... anyway), and chuckle-worthy snippets. Excellent stuff!

A nice little epilogue is definitely called for.

I do like your description of her using his voice as a \"sex aid\", it\'s a rather clever way of looking at it. Neat. And the boys/men arisarison is brant.ant. Lovely story!
person ancientgirl
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just saw you updated this. I was getting worried near the end, but I didn\'t need to be. I loved the last couple of lines though. Please update soon.
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You worry about the quality of your lemons? Whatever for? They\'re fantastic! Yum.
person Julie
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Dumbledore won\'t look and they have no idea what exactally is going on! The heat between the 2 was amazing! Hehe. I can\'t wait for the epilogue!!!