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for Parvus Obitus

by darnedchild

schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was an AMAZING story! Please tell me it isn\'t a one-shot! You HAVE to continue writing. This is excepal wal work, especially for not having seen you on aff.net before! You\'ve got a gift... let\'s hope you use it for good instead of EVIL!

Still Ill,
TheGreyLady
person WendyNat
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"It had been very stimulating to hear her but not see or touch
her. He knew it would be ten times better when he finally did give free reign to
his hands. When he saw her face when she came for him.

*Whoa, boy. That is not going to happen.* \"

Oh, make it happen! You MUST write more - they\'ve got to get together in person... or by owl post sex... SOMETHING! This was a WONDERFUL fic, especially for your first one. I\'m flushing, and that\'s tough to do nowadays ;). Pleeez write more!

WendyNat
person Lura
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
One-shot? One-Shot??! gah, you can\'t leave it hanging there, heheh... ohhh you have to continue. pretty please?
person MaddyRiddle
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was great!
That first year speech is definitely a part of our fantasies with Severus. *grin sheepishly*

You can\'t leave things like this! Please, please, please continue! After that \"phone sex\" they need to continue, please!!!!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was FABULOUS!!! Please don\'t leave it as a one shot, make it a double, a tripple even!!! As far as I\'m concerned you can take this all the way to actual touching, making love, their wedding, honeymoon & beyond!!! MORE PLEEEEEEEEEASE!!! Deb >^..^<
person Talisman
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
_Very_ well done. Oh, ho ho ho my. I don\'t smoke but now I want a cigarette for some reason.