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by ochiteirutenshi

person Shi Megami
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
T.T not fair i wanna know whats gonna happen next T.T so many good fics but few r to my liking plz update soon

May the wings of the fallen let thee rest easy,
- Shi
12:38 Nov 26, 2003
person Rasticles
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! yours ideas are really original and your writing style rocks! keep going with such a good job
person Mynona Suo
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*glomp* I love. Pos mos most haste. The look of this ghost is most interesting. And Draco *drool*. Anou...why is it that most of the fics are Severusx?. Funky. O.o I suppose you\'ll be slashing with Snape too? <3 ^_^
person Raija
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If this seemed to be interesting when I read the first chapter...well now I am completeky hooked. So *falls to her knees with puppy dogs eyes begging* Please update this soon. While I love the bad Harry I kinda miss the old one. But as you said you are the author and you have to power. Harry would do a good Dark Lord so go you go you.
person Firestorm17
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Since this fic is post-OotP, why is Umbra sending a message to Sirius? It tends to be somewhat difficult to get mail to the living-impaired. Or has Umbra taken more drastic measures in that matter? mlol
person Firestorm17
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn\'t worry too much about the supposed plothole RE Unnaming. As far as I understand it, a wizard who has received the Dementor\'s Kiss doesn\'t physically die or at least not right away. The way you\'re written Narcissa, I wouldn\'t put it past her to leave her husband\'s soulless shell in a persistant vegetative state long enough to dispose of her son\'s claim on the inheritance. That sort of plan would work if you assumat tat the magic etc doesn\'t change over until the previous Head of the Family\'s heart actually stops beating.
person Sam
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
for the first 5 chapter\'s you have wrote it Post Oop, yet for this one...

You have Harry and draco in 5th year and
Wrath is delivering a letter to Sirius.

*raises hand* Me CoNfUSeD!!!!
person LINIS
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yo!Yo! what an excellent story and so well written... as for plot wholes there are always plot holes but just ignore them and carry on as if everything is fine..

The sorting will definatly be good... I wonder if Dumbledore will try and talk to the new Harry? forgotten how to spell his new name already but i will get it down...

Cat wat wait for more.

LINIS
person Ren
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That is a great fic. I find now that I have started reading fanfictions, I rather like dark Hary fics, I hope you continue in the direction you are currently going, and i totaly agree with you on your dislike of harmone(i don\'t think thats spelled right, oh well) she just rubs me the wrong way, i suppost because ree reminds me to much of one of my \'friends\', she\'s not really a friend, she kinda just attached herself and wont go away, kinda like a leech. oh well, I\'m doing nothing but ranting now, I hope you continue with this fic, I love it.
person lupusdragon
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* I didn\'t even notice that. I feel like a dope now.... maybe because I haven\'t finished OotP yet... I am a bad girl.