schedule
December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A brill chapter... th off hand manner in which both Lupus and Riddle work is so well written it\'s unbelievable. Just one question this time... should Lupus and Draco be talking about the wands in the library as it isn\'t very private and if word got back to Dumbledore he\'d have a panick attack... probably would be a good way to die really. Also Snape seems off with Lupus, is this because he suspects things about him or is just uncertain how to take the confident young man before him? A confrontation between those two would be a good thing to see.
Anyways another good chapter and I can\'t wait for more
LINIS
Anyways another good chapter and I can\'t wait for more
LINIS
schedule
December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Quite intriguing, beautiful imagery, and just all around a wonderful read.. Definitely mad my day as I plugged through all ten chapters. Can\'t wait for more. Keep up the wonderful work.
schedule
December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That it does my dear! that it does! A fab chapter an very graphic as well... Many people are afraid of doing graphic...
I can not wait to read more
LINIS
I can not wait to read more
LINIS
schedule
December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So, do you think that this next chapter will have your story live up to the nc-17 future rateing you have placed on it? I do hope so. You are a terribly wonderful writer and I hope you update soon so that I might see some more of your wriing and possibly some action between my three favorite men. DM/HP or HP/LV.
schedule
December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*gapes like a fish* Holy gods! That was amazing. I want to see more of that Lupus/Tom action!! This is amazing and Harry is so DARK! I aboslutely love it. *sighs* I wish I could give more constructive crit, but I am just to dumbfounded. I am just going to quit now before I start asking a thousand and one questions. *bows to the all powerful author* I will await your revelations patiently oh great one. *winks*
schedule
December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*grin* Gotta love that last line: \"And I wish to fuck you.\"
schedule
December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well if that wasn\'t interesting i don\'t what is. Continue.
schedule
December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just found this fic and I absolutely love it! I love the whole Lupus idea, and I can\'t wait for the Draco/Harry relationship to start. I really like the way you described each of he Slytherins. They were perfect characterizations. ^_^ OKay, well please update soon!
Hugs & Smooches,
Jen ^.^
Hugs & Smooches,
Jen ^.^
schedule
December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ohmygods ohmygods ohmygods! *bounces* This is great *huggles* I love Harry/Tom stories... okay, so this is Lupus/Voldemort, but same difference. ^_^ *drools* I love it! So Lupus/Draco will be the main pairing... will Draco become jealous of Lupus/Voldie? Oh, will Lupus see that Voldie becomes the third holder of a custom wand? That would be so cool, the three of them would be unstopable.
I love how you portrayed the Slytherin dorms. I hate when people pick a colour associated with a group (green for Slytherins, for example) and do the entire decor in that colour. I ladrore the variety you gave it, and the feel of nature, with the ivy details. It has that aristocratic/ old money feel that one seems to associate with Slytherin.
This is amazing, and I cannot wait for the next chapter ^_^
I love how you portrayed the Slytherin dorms. I hate when people pick a colour associated with a group (green for Slytherins, for example) and do the entire decor in that colour. I ladrore the variety you gave it, and the feel of nature, with the ivy details. It has that aristocratic/ old money feel that one seems to associate with Slytherin.
This is amazing, and I cannot wait for the next chapter ^_^
schedule
December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Well written. Not sure that I really like it yet, but I\'m intruiged eh toh to keep reading and find out.