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by ochiteirutenshi

person Ancalyme
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Review.

You might not know, but Umbra does not mean Ghost, but Shadow, and that is quite a difference. Albus means White, though you could relate it to pure, and Severus means harsh, as the English word sever, as in sever punishment. Draco also means Dragon, derived from the word Draconis, note
person lee marker
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great storie I love it way to go.
person Kethhry
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s one of the best dark Harry fics I have ever read. Maybe there\'s a chance that Snape will become dark again, one of Ghost\'s followers. He\'s one of my favourite characters. I do not like to see him dead. But whaterver you choose to do with him will be fine. Please do continue, I\'m very curious what will happen next.
person Linis
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OKay I\'ll give you that. Another brill chapter... I like how you have HArry and Lupus interacting... Also I like Snape\'s interest in Lupus... Never know what\'s gonna happen with him... The mark seems quite cool... and as harry says not too obvious... can\'t wait for more.

Happy Christmas

LINIS
person alex
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start to a fic, i hope u continue,, and update soon, thanks!
person raija
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love lupus Umbra as I find some oof my qualities n him but he is just soo....i don\'t know I havt wot words for him. And your worl is just unbelivable. The only flaw iat iat it takes long time to update....well jusy yhis last chapter but anywys. Try to update soon.
person Zero
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
harry is of two minds. so cool! keep the story coming!
person Lupusdragon
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gods yes, I want to cuddle! *huggles da plushie* Woo hoo! I loved the mindscape! That was friggin amazing. Harry is the creative side, makes sense since he is the \"innocent\" one while Lupus is the analytical one. Oh, will Sevvie figure out who he is? That would rock, converting Snape to one of his own fwerswers, that would be awesome.

I do sort of feel bad for Harry, I mean, with all of the guilt and the cold... although, that is funny, him traped in a snow storm while you face winter in Alaska... I take it you don\'t care for winter much? ^__^ Personally, I love the snow... *giggles*

Take all of the time you need. This is a great story and I\'ll keep reading as long as you keep writing!
person Raija
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely great. i like lupus and I like your version of dear old Voldie.
person lupusdragon
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*frowns* but what is the fun of asking questions if I know you won\'t answer them. *sighs* How about this one... what does the phoenix tears in Draco\'sd dod do? The Dragon and Basilisk componants are deadly, so how does the healing power of phoenix tears fit in?

I love the Lupus/Voldie interactions. \"I know, they are late\" ^_^ That is just bloody brilliant.

Draco is so cute. *cuddles Draco*