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i am sad to see this story end - it was quite intriguing and rather original. i like the whole split soul/personality thing with harry and the situation with draco is interesting. i'm sure i'll spend a few hours thinking about how their relationship developed and what happens with sev. i hope your business is doing well.

I've only just started reading this, but from the first chapter I know I enjoy your style. Much to my disappointment though, your second chapter is only two paragraphs long and I'm reasonably certain it should be longer. I don't really understand how it was damaged because I think you would have noticed if it was always like that, but if you can't fix it here could you perhaps e-mail me the second chapter? I would really appreciate it.

this is a very promising story and i\'d LOOOOOOOVE for you to update (and let me know when you have updated!), but i can\'t see anything other than the first 2 paragraphs of chapter two. any reason?/could you fix that? thanx and keep writing please!

please continue with this story, I\'m loven it ^___^

This is definately a story I want to see more of soon. What do Draco do to break the ice? Will it affect how Ghost and Harry mesh? More soon PLEASE.

*whimpers* It\'s so good though. There aren\'t many dark HP fics out there and I prefer them over the regular ones. *sniffs* You have to keep going. Please?

gosh!! i hope everythin works out cuz i wna another chapter!! >.<

Good start. not too lashy but not dull either.
q. how did Harry end up in Diagon? perhaps you should place ** -marks or something if there\'s a jump in scenes or time.

I like this though I find many things not to my liking.
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It\'s intriguing to see how Dumbledore\'s mistakes have summed up. He should\'ve remembered/known that one shouldn\'t so painfully obviously direct someone\'s life. It doesn\'t feel right somehow to put the whole blame on Dumbledore. Rather it should be on the magical world as a whole, though how much had AD affected to the image of the boy who lived is a question that leaves one ponder exactly who came up with that name in the first place.
Sirius\' death was quite a blow to Harry, especially when he was one of the main persons responsible for it... I am just following along to see where do you end up with this. I wouldn\'t like to see Harry as the next dark lord. That would be rather a mockery of Voldemort and Harry is better. Well, where ever you go, I\'ll follow.

Harry is too much of an original character here for my tastes. You have good way of writing in common but the story is about this guy called Lupus now and not Harry Potter anymore. There were no good explanations of why he turned to the dark. Actually there\'s too little reasons for anything he does. The changed looks and threats, acting, it all comes to the fact that this is the ghost. I have read few Schitzo!Harry stories before and you fit right in but the reasons are important.