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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It gets more and more interesting. Personally, I\'m hoping to see more of Hermione, Harry, and Ron. I think a friendship between Mercy and Hermione could be interesting.
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it in First person as it allows insight into Mercy\'s mind, but I also think it would work equally well in third, but that\'s probably because I prefer third person stories; I know that\'s not exceptionally helpful to you, sorry. Great Chapter though. I can\'t wait for the next one so please update soon. Until the next Chapter, Slytherin Secret :o)
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great, please update soon. Lucius is so evil though-I\'m curious as to what Mercy is going to do to stop him. And what about her past?! Please give us some more info on that.
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved this chapter. Kill Lucius! I never much liked the bastard anyway!!
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Am I still reading??? What a question, Hell yeah!! You really have something very very good here, Mercedes is a wonde cha character and you have made me truly wonder about her story, I also enjoy the way you have been buliding up the plot; even though the story goes alone quite slowly, you have put these little hints there that make me come back every time I notice that you have updated..Truly a good story.
Luv,
Dixia
Luv,
Dixia
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A bit of a Disturbed fan? I like your story so far. I am very interested to see what happens next.
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I hope that you intend to make it a lengthy one. It has alot of promise as one of the really good, adventurous stories that a person can really get into.
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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the story line. I think that we can expect more than a few twists and turns in this, huh? The grammar seems a little rough in a few spots but besides that the only thing i can say is that i want more!! I absolutely loved when Mercy \"dismissed\nsy.nsy. I had a frien who did that kind of thin all the time.
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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good story keep going
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November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start, not bad at all!!! Keep up writing,
Dixia
Dixia