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Another riviting chapter. I\'m really enjoying your character, Mercy. But I\'m a big fan of Vampire stories as well! Please continue soon.

wow! I absolutely love your story. I just read the whole thing and it\'s got me captivated. I can\'t wait for more.

Truly amazing, gripping. You managed to keep everything sensual and seductive, but intresting. The plot\'s captivating. I\'ve only kept myself reding for more than two chapters once before this, but this story tops that one by a long shot. I think I\'m enjoying this just as much, if not more, than Harry Potter. Well, I really hope to read more of what you write, and can\'t wait for a new chapter to be written. Please keep up the amazing work!
~Amanda

Your story is one of my favourites on the internet!!!!! I

I would never have guessed that I\'d like your story, but surprisingly I do. Though I would probably call it a Mary Sue, it\'s one of the best Mary Sues I\'ve read in a long time. Mercy is a likeable, more-flawed-than-your-average-Mary-Sue character with an interesting life. Your Voldemort is not nearly as much of a pansy as he seems to be in most fics that include him, and Draco is interestand and multi-dimensional. Though I would recommend you check over your ies ies just a bit more for awkwardness of writing (you have a few run-on sentences and commas where they aren\'t necessary), in general I think this is a nice, well-written fic. Keep up the good work!

This last chapter was really hot. This has been a really great story, exciting and juicy ans lots of great smut. It might not be a bad idea thought to get a beta for somethe the spelling, gramar and cannon stuff. The characters are all really good and it\'s an interesting plot. I was sure mercy was going to do the dark lord there for a minute. Keep it up.Lol.;

I would tell you how great this is and how i cant wait for more but since you\'ve already told me that you dont want my reviews, screw you!

Love Ya!

omfg i love that story!!!If it isn\'t to much to ask do u think you can email me and tell me when the new chapters are up i would LOVE to read them!!!

Its about time you started posting again!! Great story line. I love it!! Keep up the good work. I dont want to go through Mercy withdrawl again. Love Ya!!

Great Chapter and definatly worth the wait. I\'m curious as to what\'s going to happen when they get to Voldemort but I understand why you may not update soon so take your time...I\'ll check everyday though. Until next time, Slytherin Secret.