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OMG, i LOVE this story, my fav fic!!!! update soon!!

Holy shit!! were in the hell did you get this idea from this story/fan fic is crazy good. i read the first chapter and was hooked i read evey chapter up till 23 i just got 24 and i was... there is no word for how crazy this story is i let a couple of my close friends read what i had and they all had the same reaction i did so ya keep the good time rooin in other words and im looking forward to the next chapter. I\'d write some fics my self but well let me put it this way the storys are all there just not the time to write them all out well any who love mercy keep the chapters comin.


yours truely Pandora

That has got to be one of the best fanfic\'s I have ever read, keep up the good work <3

Wow! Good chapter, but sad. I hate seeing anyone treated that way. Hope she pulls through. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Oh my god! What happens!

Oh man, that sounded painful. You\'re really an amazing author. I love how you went in depth on Mercy\'s past. Most characters are, for lack of a better word, stand ins for other artists. You keep everyone in character too. And the story line! I\'m literally on the edge of my chair! Please don\'t wait too long to post again!!!!

Such a sad background. :( I felt sorry for her and yet she is a killer. You\'ve created a rich history for your character, good work! Most of us writing fan fictions don\'t have to explain backgrounds because it\'s already been done by the original author. I\'m impressed!

WoW! Another powerful chapter. Your writing was great, I could feel the transition and the pull of Mercy from one side to the other, her inner conflict that is. It\'s good that she has Snape looking out for her. It\'s almost like he\'s in love with her. Is this true? Looking forward to more....

Poor Hermione! I wonder who else Mercy will kill and if she would knowingly cross that line. Good job! And thanks for correcting me on waste/waist. I had a good laugh about it!

I\'m so happy you\'ve updated so quickly! This was a great chapter. Virgin Harry was sweet and I love what Mercy did to Pansy - funny. No vibrators at Hogwarts!!!! Yikes! That\'s harsh. LOL But I suppose you could magic up some other way to get pleasure. Thanks for reviewing my story as well. I don\'t know what J.K. has planned but I\'ve been frantically trying to get my theory out there before she blows it to bits with Book Six next month! But I\'m probably going to get a little darker than she would and unfortunately she keeps them too virginal. Hope to see more of your story soon!