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for Revelations

by zephyrs1desire

person jkrazed
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE BDSM STORIES BUT I AM ABSOLUTE SHIT AT WRITING THEM. THIS ONE IS OFF TO A GREAT START!!!!!!!!!! Fred and/or George are great material to write; their so naughty and utterly hilarious. Please update soon!

person jkrazed
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE BDSM STORIES BUT I AM ABSOLUTE SHIT AT WRITING THEM. THIS ONE IS OFF TO A GREAT START!!!!!!!!!! Fred and/or George are great material to write; they\'re so naughty and utterly hilarious. Please update soon!


SEE YOU GOT ME ALL WORKED UP I DIDN\'T READ MY OWN WORDS AS I TYPED THEM. IGNORE MY PREVIOUS REVIEW. I DO SPEAK ENGLISH, I PROMISE
person Rilla
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yum! I am so glad you\'re adding to this!!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My thanks to you Dear Zephyr for indulging me with your kindness!!! I am so very pleased with chapter 2 & the lead in to the next one!!! You have quite the talent in writing things so HOT & STEAMY!!! I LOVE THIS!!! My thanks again!!!
Deb >^..^<
person Lizski
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn. You CAN NOT stop there. Absolutely can not stop there. That is too good a start to just end. Pleeeease?
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I do so hope that you will take this beyond just 1 chapter!!! This has some real potential to get even hotter & more steamy!!! PLEASE add more!!! Deb >^..^<