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I am enjoying Revelations very much... I tend to wait to review until the peice is finished, otherwise I feel that I am repeating myself with each review. In this type of smut, I don\'t believe we can judge if the characters are OOC. We don\'ow eow enough about them... so play. Have fun. And for Goodness sakes, write!

hi! it\'s a good story, but i think you should adept the prophecy. i hope this attempt will be good enough:

Wenn Begehren in der Hexe brennt,
dann wird das Feuer blauschwarz lodern,
Wenn um Schmerz gefleht wird, achte sehr,
immer das Gleichgewicht zu bewahren.
Vergn

This is so different from anything that I have read before!!! There is so much more here than meets the eye, hiding beneath the surface of Hermione\'s being. I think this is going to prove to be quite interesting & look forward to seeing just how far you take it*

Very very interesting. i like the mystical unknown force used. Dark and mysterious..and erotic

No, keep writing! Maybe you have so many hits because people keep rereading, repelled and drawn to your words, fascinated by the rich darkness you have begun to portray. I eagerly await the next installment-- and perhaps some more explanations? Snape thinking about things before Hermione comes to him? As much as I love smut, I really hope you develop a storyline here- I hope you illustrate your characters fully. I\'m intrigued by the darkFred, as for Hermione, I always knew she had it in her. She\'ll try everything once, then be amazed at what she wants to do again and again.

Wow!
Very intense.
There is no way she is g to to end up going back Fred, Is she?
I hope not, she and Sev make a very powerful couple!!
Chat soon?
Kisses
GrrArrg

WOW!!! I like what you are doing here & the plot is sounding quite interesting. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!!!
Deb >^..^<

this is brilliant! at least, in my dirty, disgusting
little mind.

i just loved the entire thing!

~on knees, begging~ please, please, please!
update soon!

~blessings~
ldf

Wow, it looks like you have some rather delicious possibilities here! I can\' t wait to see where you go with this!

Hot damn woman!!
All bow to queen Zephyr!!
She\'s my beta you know, yes I am honoured!!
Loved it, loved it, loved it!!
Now let Sev have ago!!
Kisses
GrrArrg