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for Revelations

by zephyrs1desire

person Anon
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person iloveseverussnape
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!! This story is absolutely fantastic!!! It's so amazing! Please update it. I really need to know what happens. Please!!!!!!!!!!!
person KanSol
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goosh!!! I think I read a story (DBZ) that was inspired by this story. It\'s so weird. I like yours more. No worries though...it wasn\'t palagrizism *your smut has fried my brain* or anything. For some reason I typed \"I love you\" instead of I love your story. I love all your stories.
person harley
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really am liking this story. I\'m hoping to be able to read more chapters, are they coming? Great job.
person Jen
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting story, and I hope you plan on finishing it someday. One question, is it inspired by Anne Bishop's work at all?
person slashgoddess
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. yet another wonderful story... *grins* Gods, I love severus... he\'s so dark and sexy... and yeah... *drools* anywho wonderfully written story... waiting for an update! *Grins've 've read all of your other stories so far and I\'ve loved them all...
person Slytherin Secret
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I love it. It\'s very different to \"Be Careful What You Wish\" but still really well written and intriguing. What\'s going on with Hermione\'s power though? I hope you explain a bit more of that as it sounds very interesting and dark. Until next time, Slytherin Secret.
person Lyndie
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now I think I understand what\'s going on. Sorry, I\'m a little slow today. I guess poor Fred is a little out of his league. And leave it to Severus to be able to help a Witch reach her full potential. I look forward to seeing how you deal with Hermione coming to terms with prefering Severus over Fred. Is it that she\'s just grown beyond Fred, even though he helped her get there? How will Severus deal with it? Will he just be his right bastard self and keep hold of his possession--how could he let her go afterall?
person ladydeathfaerie
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
it becomes intriguing.

yes... tall and imposing mmm, a wonderful
image, to be sure.

i await more with baited breath

~blessings~
ldf