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by Nephir

person amousmous
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like the plot to this story. Please update as soon as you can.
person Lidra
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent. Can we have some more please?
person Magdelena
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story thus far, but arrrgghhh, it cut off just when it was getting good, mid-sentence. Did you mean to cut it off there? Will be anxiously awaiting an update!!!

Maggie
person Momma-dar
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love Remus/Harry stories and i would have to say that this one looks to be one of the most promising stories I have read to this day. Your writing is fluent and bursting with vivid details and descriptions. It makes your story flow so much easier. You are doing a wonderful job with this story so far and I can\'t wait to see you update with the next chapter. Keep up the brilliant writing and I will be waiting patiently.
person SandraM
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!!!! What a place to leave it! Update soon please, or I\'ll be as mad as Remus would be.