rate_review Reviews

Oh that was a beautiful story. Very sentimental, without getting too overly mushy. The only thing that can make most stories here better is more use of spellcheck.

Sorry, I just had to review this again after reading it a second time.... It is so, so, so cool!
I cried after I read this because it is beautiifully written and well described.
Good luck for any upcoming stories!

That is one of the best short stories I've ever read! So much ... I don't know ... it's just so believable and realistic! You're a great writer and should continue writing stories such as these.
~Mercika

This is a great story..but you have the last line in your story wrong..it\'s\"But you still have all of me..\"

This was one of the best I\'ve read so far. Please continue writing your lovely fics. I will defintely be watching for more from you.

Oh man that was better than To Hermione! I nearly cried. it was so sweet. thank you.

Tragically beautiful with a happy, beautiful ending.

It was so wierd, i\'m listening to mix cd and there is a song on here called \'Even in Death\' by Evanescence. And it came on as I began to read this. The one line goes like this... \'...stay forever me with you, I know the softly spoken words you gave me, even in deatrh our love goes on. And I can\'t love you anymore than I do.\' This story made me cry SO much. It\'s so powerful... I cried because Draco died and it was just emotional and so well written. *claps outloud*. Beautifully written dear.

That made me cry. I mean real tears. It was beautiful ariel, you should be proud.