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Interesting fic. Quite good erotica, mastrabation is a subject you don\'t see all that often. good on you. the build up was nice too. the converstaion between the two teachers hoever felt a little contived in placeyouryour snape needs a bit more wit but that comes with pratice. good luck in future, bang up fic. keep up the good work.

Great read. Original, imaginative and completely possible within Canon, a rare occurrence. Truly you are a writer who I must read more of, pity I don\'t care much for SS/RL, but I