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by MsPixie

person Leah
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*tosses cabbage around threateningly* gah! so good, but such a darned evil writer! and rest assured, i adore your small bits of plot backing in this thing. mapprappreciated. i commiserate with you over the writer\'s block, but please, get to filing! your poor muse (and my rather un-aired as of late mind) are counting on you. pretty please? with a fizzing whizbee on top? :)
person Leah
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh, err... i just can\'t seem to look my coffee in the face... and now i keep picturing that whole christmas boxer thing somebody mentioned! curse us and crush us... ah well. i\'m happy. and intrigued, with sor sorts of awful ideas.
person Dixia
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah its me again...Time to be worthy of the \'longest reviewer\'- award *grins*
You are definately getting to the PWP, but personally I enjoy the fact that you spend that few chapters to get there; In my mind there\'s nothing--well, I can think of few things, but that\'s not relevant, eh?-- worse than pure PWP, it just simply bores me. So three cheers for you for keeping a plot here!!!
and stop talking BS, YOU , yes YOU there MsPixie, have a gift of writing. Honestly. I\'m not sucking u to get a nice note later on--even though that idea Has crossed my mind, I have to admit ;-)--I\'m telling you how I feel about your writing style. U see I have read a Lot. And with \'a Lot\' I mean something like 4 books per week for at least 9 years--yeah I just couldn\'t stop showing off, get over it :P--, so trust me on this. You got talent. Keep writing. AND A HUGE THANKS FOR GETTING SIRIUS IN THE STORY... its getting really erm...Hot?!?

Luv,
Dixia
person RhianwynCarma
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More smut? Yeah!!! *jumps up and down enthusiastically*

Thank you SO much for continuing this story. Please feel free to indulge your Santa-Gene at any available opportunity.

Hmm...I must write Santa and ask him to add Sirius to my Christmas List. *Briefly wonders what the rest of her family would think if they came down on Christmas morning and saw two grown men sitting in front of the tree with nothing except red and green boxers on*

Will there be lots of smut? *waits expectantly*

RC
person Jess
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Am now beyond any form of speech can barely type here, stuff slow and tantalizing just let me jump on him and him, hurry hurry i can\'t wait much longer......JESS.. great chapter by the way.
person kk
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think that had to be the best remus story i have ever read!hat hat was utterly amazing. thank you. very very much.
person RhianwynCarma
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*collapses in a pof mof mushy estrogen*

WOW....

That\'s what I want for Christmas!

*dashes away to find her Santa-List*

That was fabulous smut! Write more please. I am now addicted.

RhianwynCarma
person ~Dracaena~
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sheesh, how could I miss such a treat.
There are so few het Remus Lupin stories out there and yours is definitely one of the best I\'ve read a rare and precious jewel.

I read your story last night and was totally in awe couldn\'t stop squiriming and finally found out that there are still stories out there who can provide me with the feeling of butterflies in my stomach. I absolutely adore the tension you built and of course the smut was so to say *purr*fect.

I hope you\'ll continue writing stories like that because good HETERS are hard to come by these days. And I would really love to link your story when my http://www.remus-lupin.de will finally be finished. Hope that\'s okay with you.

person Dixia
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, guess who???? yeah its me again *grins*
this is getting Hot.. I mean really Hot..*breaths slowly*
few things:( yeah I Luv writing lists :p)
1.*loong sigh* WHERE THE H*** DID U GET THAT GIFT OF WRITING?????
2. What it comes to the idea of getting Sirius in the story as well, I won\'t object ( But I\'m not sure if I\'m gonna drown in my own drool or have a heart attack, but I\'m pretty sure I won\'t survive..but at least I would die happy! :D)
3.About my own story-thingies, yeah there are two tiny things that make it a bit difficult for me to put them up here:a) All my stories so far have been written in Finnish and my translating ability doesn\'t excist b) I haven\'t have any brilliant ideas lately *wonders where her muse has gone*, and I\'m not that good writer that I could turn a compleatly idiotic idea into a decent story
4. Someone mentioned that I shouldn\'t have to choose between Sirius and Remus, but I guess I have to \'cos a)I\'m not greed and b) I never learnt the noble art of sharing *does the Gollum imitation: he\'s mine!, my own, my precious...*

Keep it up!!
luv, Dixia

P.s Even if you do put Sirius into this story, plz write another story with just him on it..Plz.. pretty much all the Sirius stories out there are Slash and I\'m getting a bit bored with that o.. D..
person Incubaby
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
~I really like this fic. I think it\'s really neat how they meet in the library and all that. You\'re very descriptive, which is great. It definitely helps to feel like it\'s actually happening to me. This is the first fic I\'ve read that\'s written like this, and I have to say it\'s not disappointing. Please continue! I look forward to see what you have planned with Sirius... ~Cheers :)