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for Family Secrets

by Keara

person Jackie Malfoy
schedule February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...the first two chapters, I was kind of confused, but once the third chapter rolled around, everything fell into place. This is a really good story, and I hope to see more of it in the future. From what I've seen, you're an excellent writer.
person deedee
schedule February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow...great chapter keep up the exellent work!! oh and is it
just me or do dove and joseph resemble harry and draco???
i mean come on!! blonde hair bright green eyes? black hair and grey eyes??
come on!! lol. did you do this on purpose?? please tell me!!
person deedee
schedule February 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!! keep it coming!! let me guess hermione will be all curious like and find out about veela's
being able to get pregnant she'll talk to ron and ask if he was top or bottom and then shell say "no reason just curios" and then shell confront draco and so on and so forth.....
person Anon
schedule February 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is the bomb, a very unique plot
person ash
schedule February 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! A very good R/D fanfic! there only a few R/D fanfic here and yours is really good! Your Ron is very IC! This is the most believable m-preg fanfic since Draco is part veela. It is very convincing with his hair color.

Write more please! I am a huge R/D shipper, though I ship R/H too...
person missrose54
schedule February 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i laughed, i cried and that is what makes a good story. i cant wait to see what happens next. keep it coming.
person deedee
schedule February 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sigh..another great chapter!! keep it coming!!
person deedee
schedule February 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh dear! you soo cannot leave it like this please update!!
youre doing soo well!!
person sara
schedule January 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GOD THIS STORY IS GETTIN' BETTER AND BETTER EVERY TIME!!! it's already on my recs, And I'm putting it on my homepage's 'recs' section!! luv ya! btw, do ya have a homepage of your own? so I can put a link to yours on mine...

bjokas, massarokas!! (or sara, as you wish)
person RosaCrouch
schedule January 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I added this wonderful story to my HPFF site. I hope you don't mind, and if you don't like it.. you can email me! The site is @ www.harrypotterfanfiction.tk